BrOtHa-HoOd v'S young_bleek (vote this time peeps)
 

rules

spitt
usual house rules
3-0 k.o
5-0 murked

go ahead homie gud luk :thumbup:


:laugh2: :gfy:

yea my style is official and my ryhmes is tight/ got ure gurlz drinkin my cum like it is sprite/and i'll leave a question mark to yo head/ shood yo ass stay alive or shood u b dead/ any way i'll cut off ure leg /and da gun go to u and ure manz sorta like a cell phone/ u got shellz dancin in ure shoez call it a shell toe/ and u think when i beat u imma have simpathy/ man im hartless like i had a open heart surgery/ niggaz is alwayz tryin ta spray and dey betta kno/ datz y i use my fuckin ryhmes as a rain coat/ i jus spoke da truth and im thru/ my opinion hood i jus broke u!

HERE'S MY SPITT...

cant believe am doing this, he sound like a fuckin yeti,
from the looks he spells out his flows with alphabetic spaghetti//
Your flows weak, n u don’t seem so bright,
You cudn’t shine if u turned ur style inta a untra-violet light//
Am a snap ur neck n leave u disabled like Christopher Reeves,
Wanna no who I am, type in “perfection” on “ask geeves”//
Am infecting the game like I injected it wid sars, ( deadly disease)
U smoke dick like I smoke Cuban cigars//
Im a make my point like I wus decimal,
Stick ta masturbation I heard ur professional//
N dont b sayin am feed of ur shit, cos its wack dats the deal
If i did they wudnt b enuf food fo a afghanistani'z meal
This cat spit like his eyez r glazed,
He made like a blunt n just got blazed//

bleek:your structure is annoying.. you need to cut that out lol.. use like ~ at the end of youe line or somehting.. it wasent even in lines at all.. work on your structure and oyu shouldget a lil better..

brotha:you had some pretty nice punches int here.. i liked a few a of em.. lines were a tad strectched, but it was decent flow..vocab was decent.. decen verse all around.. nice job..


v/brotha hood

Bleek you need to improve ur structure majorly dawg the way u type is gonna hold u back it ruins ur flow its hard to read and u cant spot out the personals the wordplay and metas multis that well.

Brother: an aight verse basic structure ok punches personals and some good wordplay too. Much better than ur opponents i think it was 1 sided from the outset Brother u got this on all catagories.

V/Brotherhood

RTF http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...ewpost&t=134057

hahaha funny stuff.

bleek had it going on but he aint got really the flow..

hood got it going on and he had the flow

v-hood

brotha hood won this by punches he had good structure and flow but mostly punches
other guy wasnt really feelin ya flow i got lost a couple of times not to be eman but urs was wack
v/brotha

return tha favor please
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133541

Ok

Stuctue.. brotherhood
flow..brotherhood
punches.. brotherhood
opener.. brotherhood
close.. brotherhood

pretty much one sided, and young-bleek, quit talking about violence, you don't know him...

punches..BrOtHa-HoOd
flow..BrOtHa-HoOd
opener...BrOtHa-HoOd
close..BrOtHa-HoOd

ya'll did ya'll thing it was a good battle but being far i think BrOtHa-HoOd win

Young Bleek - Ya need work. Ya structure is all smashed together and i could predict most of ya rhymes. Keep elevatin and better luck next time. 3/10

Brotha Hood - You need some elevation too, but not as much as bleek. You had a couple of punches and better structure which is why you got my vote. 4.5/10

Vote - Brotha Hood