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Keith Moon 07-08-04 06:30 PM

Eragance vs BigChase
 
house rules.....10 lines......you spit first.......good luck....time limit:freestyle this bitch.....

Eragance 07-08-04 06:59 PM

i am bout to spit be prepared for hot shit

Keith Moon 07-08-04 07:12 PM

freestyle it toh......non of tat pre-written shit or else....your dqued

Eragance 07-08-04 07:21 PM

ok


battle blaze a nigga chase tha nigga in rage/ im in no race to catch a case/ in orderly sequence ya time will come/ i shoot you wit my lyrics i dont need a gun/ i dont battle you man cause i think you can get wit me/ i need exposure i did it all for publicity/ in the public eye on tha spot/ and whenever i on the spot/ whatever guy on tha spot/ get drained of all props/ my flow be my chioce of glocks/ as you feel the wrath of my voice box/ think about it chase ya not that big/ throwin lyrical punches that a crush ya ribs/got damn chase you dont know what i will do to u/ shit i be the one frrestylin at ya funeral/im new to the board but a vet of the game/my ego rather large shit my head to big for my brain/i continue to walk over u like rugs in a room/ i just murder this prick now he gets tucked in tha tomb

Eragance 07-08-04 07:25 PM

thats frrestyle on every thing nigga go head and spit

Keith Moon 07-08-04 07:28 PM

kay jsut saw it..............hold on ima type my freestyle up.....

Keith Moon 07-08-04 07:49 PM

Im sorry to make your first battle on the site a terrible disapointmoint
After seein your verse, When they had Rap 101 claasses you missed ya appointment..
You went over the limit for your verse by 8 lines and there was still no punch
Your like Kool-Aide without sugar, nothin, black people hate you, get the hunch..
Said before you have an enourmous ego and run with desert eagles aint that a gat
But now you say you dont need to carry guns so where tha hell is the truth at..
Your sig" Fuck with me if you want nigga" aint that shit a little homosexual
Ya bein close to my skill is like comparing Einstein and Jessica Simpson as intellectuals.
Go ahead tell you freinds you an unstopable lyrical killah witty, and smoothe
But the truth is no matter what you say, who you suck, or what you do your gonna loose..

freestyle im tired and had 3 battles today sooo yeah...not odin my best....

Eragance 07-08-04 08:11 PM

nice shit but how did i go over the limit by 8 lines

Keith Moon 07-08-04 08:13 PM

it was 10 lines mx and you posted 18 lines sooooo yeah

QBsmasher 07-08-04 08:20 PM

BigChase I think he only went over by half a line...Unless you are accustomed to a different form of counting.

Wasnt really feelin either of ya flows...Eragance didnt have any structure at all. While Chase had a lot of streched lines. Just wasnt much flow to either one of yalls stuff.

Chase threw a few punches...pretty weak stuff, but he did attempt a few of them. Eragance I wasnt really feelin what ya was doin, you need to break it down into lines and bars, so that peeps can see it.

Just a lil better overall verse from BigChase.

v/Bigchase

Eragance 07-08-04 09:02 PM

v ote

Ca'lam 07-08-04 09:08 PM

lol.. hehe

chase:i think yougot this easily... rhymes was much more complex..actually had punches that hit.. flow was more complex.. easy win

eragance:i think you need to woork on putting punches in ya verse.. and maybe some personals. but you just a begginer, adn that all comes with time.. so stay up and battling..

v/chase

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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133994

mistah_tate 07-08-04 09:18 PM

i wasn't really feelin eragance's flow at all, his setup was way fucked up, you need to put spaces in between your bars, dont lay it all out like a paragraph, had a few decent punchlines but the rest was space killa

chase on the other hand came mediocre, but he was still killin eragance, had better punchlines, i liked the jessica simpson and einstien thing, that was pretty tight

so all in all

chase got this

Keith Moon 07-09-04 11:03 PM

yo thnx all ya voters.....plz vote on this........uppin fo votes.....

G 07-10-04 12:46 AM

Yeah chase took this one. Err didnt even had any punches in his verse. Chase had lines that were hittin hard. He also had some good vocabulary in there too. Err...keep elevatin...

Vote- Chase


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