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Cocaine 07-08-04 08:27 PM

where you at.. Genicide and Triple N
 
Where You At? Genicide and Triple N

Chorus..

Shawtie at one time was always by my side
Any luv I needed at the time she'd provide
I don't know why things have suddenly arry
But I knew it was over when she left an didn't say goodbye

Chorus..

Genicide

it was a cold night... my girl decides something just aint right
she says the sex is tight... but im gone... she's on the next flight
so she split... gives me a kiss on the cheek and shes gone..
how can this be our love was crazy.. what did i do wrong??
she packed her bags... and took everything up but a baby toy
he only six months old how could u leave me wit just my baby boy
im just a kid.. but now she got me raisen a young child on my own
im living in an apartment... dont got nothing cant even afford a phone
soo now i gotta stay at home all day and i dont got nothing to do
better think long and hard..this could happen when ur girl leaves you

Chorus.

Triple N

yeah I told you when u had junior I wouldn't leave you
I looked you in ya eyes an promised that I'd never deseave you
You looked back at me an said the same things
But you was fucking my manz while I was picking out wedding rings
I had no idea you was capobal of such betrayal
I was faithful, everynight rocking lil man to sleep in his cradle
You was running the streets wit my manz gettin fed dick
Then around 12 o'clock you'd run home real quick
To give the appearence that nothing was going down
But I knew that something was happening when I wasn't round
But I stayed wit you cuz you were the mother of my son
Even knowing what u do I still saw you as the one
I foolishly believed your stories even though I could sense they were lies
Thats why I didn't feel like a fool when u left without a goodbye

Chorus..

drop some feedback,,

Cocaine 07-09-04 01:36 AM

yo uppin fo feedback.. c'mon people rate this

Triple_N 07-10-04 01:12 AM

Uppin for some feedback come on y'all stop sleeping

DON 07-10-04 02:00 AM

not bad nice only thing to work on is stretched line cause that wouldnt fot to a beat use the least words possible always remember that aight pc

YaYo 07-12-04 07:28 PM

this wasnt bad yo..the line were juss a lil stretched but not dat bad

e-dubz 07-12-04 08:00 PM

nice drop, good story..had good emotion to it..only thing u gotta work on is flow and ur stretched lines but overall it was a good drop


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