'Hardwood-Class-$ickz Freestyle'"Da Jokah"
 

aight chek chek its my first audio my boi from ma block Lil Patriot made tha beat we makin a cd called "Killaz From Da East" holla back

heres tha lyrics....
ayo chek chek
How u gon stepp up dats da king of dealin droh and meth//
Acurate gun wounds to ya ear..make u a reall so so def//
Reality strickes u wen dem Class-Sick niggas step-in//
Document me nigga..aight Class-Sickswaat iam rep-in//
Will you plz stop being stupid and pull ya glock out//
Oviously u aint a tru reppa cuz ur blocks out//
On top of da grave yard..u all plass-tick//
Death commin easy wen u step up 2 da Class-Sicks//

heres tha audio link...
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/6/dajokahmusic.htm

uppin this...

I can tell you got ya mic from the swap meet like me lol..... Im sayin its decent for what it is but you gotta work on your emotion - you soundin monotone as it is now... Stay up good luck... peep the joints me and tonyself got up in this thread and drop some feedback- 1

not bad, put some more emotion into your words, lyrics not bad.

aiight mayne no doubt wun...

you prety good but you coulda done betta I ain't got no speakers so i can't hear the audio versions on a scale of 1to5 that hardwood shit was a 2 dog I'm just doing what bloods do keeping it real boy!! B's up nigga

hmm...you need a new mic homie...beat is wack...and sounds like you whisperin...iono man...you might be nice...but I cant tell with ya mic fuckin up like that ish...just get a new mic..period...pz

Beat's good. I did a piece on it before. hit me up on AIM for the link.
The vocal's sucked. no offense. The quality was low. an the lil yeh's in it were kinda dumb.

you need help elevatin' your in my crew man. jus hit me up. I can help.