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TRIGGA.:vrs:.truth a.k.a....
this is a quick one
5-10linezno/hate/dr/crew/unexplained votes verses due 30min after checkin in good luck |
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Check In...your Supposed Ta Spit First...are Ya Goin Ta?
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Your one of them niggas that that sit down and never get signed to a record label~
h0w a nigga like you got a computer with internet when ya can't afford cabel~ U get shot by my rhymes like as if you were tupac taking a cruz but ended up at ya grave~ Ru sure you wanted this battle....or did ya just try to act brave~ Stop to think cuz i rushed this battle and didn't take my time like a nigga without loading his gun~ My nigga i don't understand why you still battle....you should have stopped when you became 0-1~ Of all the people i murderd your gonna be killed with ya dick up your ass~ [K[/b]uz i cut your chest open take your liver out and cut your eyes out with a piece of glass~ Ended up killing ya mom but with slow cuts to the wrist so she bleeds out slow and painfull~ Doing this was brutal ...to murder ya family...and leave you with the mess it had ya unstabel~ it was quick .....didn't really try but i think it was good enough to take his ass....good night every one lol |
[QUOTE=TRIGGA MATRIX]Your one of them niggas that that sit down and never get signed to a record label~
h0w a nigga like you got a computer with internet when ya can't afford cabel~ U get shot by my rhymes like as if you were tupac taking a cruz but ended up at ya grave~ Ru sure you wanted this battle....or did ya just try to act brave~ Stop to think cuz i rushed this battle and didn't take my time like a nigga without loading his gun~ My nigga i don't understand why you still battle....you should have stopped when you became 0-1~ Of all the people i murderd your gonna be killed with ya dick up your ass~ Kuz i cut your chest open take your liver out and cut your eyes out with a piece of glass~ Ended up killing ya mom but with slow cuts to the wrist so she bleeds out slow and painfull~ Doing this was brutal ...to murder ya family...and leave you with the mess it had ya unstabel~ i had to fix the "K" here it is all fix up |
ass eh,well don't always go by previous battles,things change !!!!!!!
You beatin me in this battle..."Shit thats Fukin Impossible"..// To me your a "Steppin~Stone" of "CHORUS" not an "Obsticale"..// In a room full of FAGGOTS they all your "Friends~Buddies~And~Pals"..// I cant tell you HOMOS 'Apart' like Hairy~Kids~With~Uni~Brows"..// You "Make~A~Mistake" get'in pissed on like bathrooms with "Ur'nil~Cakes"..//(ur'e nill) da truth "Flips~Like~Flap~Jacks" matrix is "Flat~Like~Pan~Cakes"..// You rappin defeats the puropse like Blind "People~Drivin~Cars"..// Or War~Amp Parapalegics wearing "Pairs~Of~Shin~Guards"..// Your " Worse-then-herbs, u turned-the-clips" i spit fire, jus to leave u" Burned-n-shit " Talk shit then i'll "Bust-sum-ribs " cuz my punches will leave ur " Face-wrapped " like " Muslim-kids " ur a " failure-to-rap " i'll put this " Flame-to-ya-back " u should really get ur ass beat for not "Thinkin-ur-wack "... My rods on ur face, What now?...ur mouths the Blame, what a Shame I got ur wanted win, come get it back''.. i've elevated,n come back with a vengence,goo'luck TM |
Nice Acrostic TRIGGA...verse was pretty weak though.
truth a.k.a... some pretty nice lyrics...took ya a while to write that huh lol. I aint gonna vote though, cause TRIGGA might think its a hate vote. Big ups to both of yall though. |
me in my honest vote i think trigga got it truth wasnt really nuttin special i aint feelin that what made me feel on trigga so much was the wya he set it up in that he had more punches structure flow and humor and 2 of those things i look for in a battle truth need to come harder i know u can but u just didnt come to hard to take this
v/trigga return tha favor http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133838 |
yeah i know this battle was weak compared to my real battles but i was thinking it would be enough cuz he was a newbie........but i got fooled..........uppin for more votes
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trigga you came strate, i like the "acrostic", i was gone call it hidden message until i seen niggas was callin it that. but besides that ya flow was kinda on the weak side, but like u said i guess u thought u was up against no talent, i liked some of your punches but it didnt live up to what your "acrostic" said.
truth came just that much harder, his shit was a little bit more creative and flowed togetha nicely when u said it outloud, so my vote goes to truth yall do me a favor and hit this up |
str8^ uppin for more votes
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Both MCs did ok....I think Trigga dint come his best in this battle. Truth got the best of him with that poetic verse. I think Triggas structure needs a little work cuz he jams a bunch of words into one line which fucks up the flow. Truth had some metas in there that I liked. And that one line about kids and unibrows. that was ill.
Vote - Truth aka Return tha favor with an honest vote: http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133759 |
yo both verses was pretty hot but truth aka was offf the chain he had some tight punches and trigga this aint no hate votes hes just straight up betta than ya ass so my v/ is trigga and idk how to drop links but could some of yall vote in a battle with me vs kelo? lol peace
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TRIGGA MATRIX
structure was wack...all of ur lines were stretched...flow fell off cause of the stretchness...u had a few metas...wordplay was pretty good...a few of ur punches connected...personals were decent... truth a.k.a.... structure was pretty bad...most of ur lines were stretched...flow fell off a lil cause of the stretchnes...u had tight metas...tight wordplay...a few of ur punches connected...personals were ok... Overall neither had a good structure...neither had a stable flow...both had ok personals...truth had more, and better metas...better wordplay...and more connecting punches...so basing off of that...truth a.k.a.... gets my vote... VOTE - TRUTH A.K.A.... |
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