M.C. Skitlz raps
 

[COLOR=Red]takin over vice city//
im tommy vecetti//
with weapons from a AK-47 to a machetti//
i got a pistol and the cops aint ready//
doin missions for people takin over slow and steady//
chainsawin haitins who wana be-head me//
hold on a second i got a call on my celly//
its my lawyer sayin the law comin to get me in a helly//
i aint sweatin it//
i slow down time by takin a vicatin hit//
now im runnin faster then the law but it aint fast enough i grab a PCJ 500 and split//
i fall and they got me surrounded so i say enough of this shit//
i get the M-16 and empty clip after clip//
screamin you dont know who your mesin with//
runnin low on armor but i got money so im investin it//
in a bulletproof vest to so i can protect my chest with it//
came out the store shootin at pigs//
breakin bones up like pine tree twigs//
man these people is fragile//
shoot 3 4 5 man im buck wild//
now im on the run again hoppin over a wall man im agile//
ima run to pole possition and say hi//
after a nice little lap dance//
i pull up my pants//
thats when my celly rings its lance vance//
he says drop by the mansion when you got a chance//
ima stop by and knock him into a trance//
im straped with more steel then the eifel tower in france//
steppin in the mansion//
chase him on the roof im puffin and pantin//
pull the snyper and give him a eye socket expansion//
now i got this snitch//
screamin high pitch//
shootin repeadetly cuz my trigga fingga itch//
im done with this weapon im gona switch//
im out the mansion cuz thats where the cops will be//
six stars is my wanted level i got tanks chasin me//
hoped into a car from my garage to flee//
but as i pull out the drive way the cops bust me and end my killin spree//[/COLOR]

187 hater down
 

[COLOR=Red]you came psyched and hyped//
with a knife to a gun fight//
and got snyped//
i attempted to blast you 9 times like 50//
but you moved swiftly//
6 bullets went whistling by your nose//
but you couldnt dodge the last 3 blows//
when i thought i took your life i quickly left sight before a witness shows//
24 hours later//
im readin the paper//
and whos on the cover? its that hater//
hes on breathing machines in a incubator//
so i rushed to the hospital//
as fast as possible//
sign in as a visitor, heated as hell to your room i darted//
to finally finish what i started//
found your room and bursted in//
ready to dissperse a sin//
punched your doctor and made his head spin//
look at you and you said "im surrenderin"//
its to late for that//
i drew the gat//
the murda weapon was a silenced nine//
then i gave you the last 6 of the nine//
right to your spine//
and watch your vitals turn to a straight line//
then the cops kick the door down to the room//
im high as fuck after popin a shroom//
so i get on a broom//
then i jump out the 7TH story balcony//
there i go its out with me//
and im about to be//
another suicide victim//
but to my luck as if i was predictin//
that i was gona escape my conviction//
theres a mattres van at the end of my leap//
out of some luck i fall in the back of the truck in a mattres heap//
and the story ends a i fall asleep//[/COLOR]

u could of posted this in frontlines or suth'n

oh yeah welcome to the site

m.c.skitlz
 

yo man that shit was hot dawg. yo got what it takes to make it to the roc!

flow was not well.....syllable count was wwwwaacccckkkkkK!!!!!!!!!!!

welcome to the site!

/\/\ agreed and welcome-- 1

yo man its be-head not de-head, you've got to know good english to be an ill emcee.
anyway -Welcome-

Oh hex nah. The bitch's flow is full of glitches, yo.

Sorry. Couldn't help myself. :D

Thanks And Fuck You's
 

WHOEVER DROPPED ME A REPLY AND LIKED MY SHIT, THANK YOU :thumbup:

WHOEVER DROPPED ME A REPLY AND DIDNT LIKE MY SHIT BUT MADE CONSTRUCTIVE CRITIZISM, THANK YOU :thumbup:

WHOEVER DROPPED ME A REPLY AND HATED ON MY SHIT, FUCK YOU :flipoff:


"Tired of all the rappers who ain't bringin half the skill as me
saying they wasn't feeling me when nobody's as ill as me"
-Eminem (modified)

well . . .
 

i thouhgt it was aight,
but jus wonderin ain't that kinda stuff sposd to go in to like the other sections? so other people will be critics etc. oh well i guess . . .