Young_bleek Vs. Datruth29
 

Blind Spit
10-15 Linez
Due In 30 Min.
No Hating

Ok, Let's Go

yea nigga i'll pop 5 in yo shoulder and u'll b hittin da shake/nigga u cake/I'll leave u out bloody in da lake/getting wet by da clips and shit when i spit/cuz niggaz know bleek a pull a hit real quick/im too quick/im too slick/i push coke from east to west u'll think im pushin bricks/ Da truth u aint speaking tha truth wat u speakin is bogus/before u spit wat u need to do is focus/ I spit bars nigga it dont matter/put holes thru yo diaphram and make it shatter ure blatter/nigga dont chatter/be about it/ u beating me man playa i doubt it/ tha ryhmes that i spit/man it wasn't writ/ i think u a pussy u coodnt role wit my clit




I think thatz it i might of went ova 15 barz but its ok my nigga!

I sick these damn whores, slap this youngter n ask him what he Raps For
Coz man, this dude sells more "bullshit" than fertilizer in Plant Stores
This is my kingdom, be glad that it's something you can Serve In
coz you're verbless, couldn't put a thought together if you wrote it in Cursive
Shit, you can't even win a "battle" with a Roman Battalion
it's like i'm a Unicorn, you're a 2nd generation, steamed out Stallion
Why do I even Rhyme Wit U, u don't even know y the Sky Is Blue
Bitch can't you tell, I'm The truth, look at yo watch, it's Time To Lose
I'll never be as blind as U, I couldn't lose to you if that's what I Treid To Do
Buy a Clue, I straight up conquered you..... Like America after 1492
You're whack, and battling me is stupid, so Why Do It
I stay on wax, you shouldn't even be on a "track", unless your Tied To It
Your toughest challenge, I can do while Takin A Shit, without Energy
I Lyrically Rip MC's that steal their names from Memphis "Bleek"
You just Little Geek, your mouth's dry, how could you of Spit wit Me?


shit man, no wonder your flow couldn't get wit me....................

peace................

Nigga, I said 15 lines max, you wrote about eight.. I wrote exactly 15 with the one extra line at the bottom... you could of wrote more, you played yo self....

good battle though.. upping

oh my bad im new to this site and shit but personally i think u got me ure real good wat crew u wit!

-Youngbleek.
yea nigga i'll pop 5 in yo shoulder and u'll b hittin da shake/
nigga u cake/
I'll leave u out bloody in da lake/
straight flow, no wordplay, too simple of a diss
getting wet by da clips and shit when i spit/
cuz niggaz know bleek a pull a hit real quick/
im too quick/
im too slick/
i push coke from east to west u'll think im pushin bricks/
coo flow, no wordplay, not really a diss
Da truth u aint speaking tha truth wat u speakin is bogus/
before u spit wat u need to do is focus/
average flow, no wordplay, weak/simplistic diss
I spit bars nigga it dont matter/
put holes thru yo diaphram and make it shatter ure blatter/
nigga dont chatter/
coo flow, no wordplay, weak/simplistic diss
be about it/
u beating me man playa i doubt it/
tha ryhmes that i spit/
man it wasn't writ/
i think u a pussy u coodnt role wit my clit
coo flow, weak wordplay, played out diss


-Datruth29.
I sick these damn whores, slap this youngter n ask him what he Raps For
Coz man, this dude sells more "bullshit" than fertilizer in Plant Stores
coo flow, coo wordplay, aight diss
This is my kingdom, be glad that it's something you can Serve In
coz you're verbless, couldn't put a thought together if you wrote it in Cursive
coo multi with the flow, weak wordplay, weak punch
Shit, you can't even win a "battle" with a Roman Battalion
it's like i'm a Unicorn, you're a 2nd generation, steamed out Stallion
average flow, forced wordplay, weak diss
Why do I even Rhyme Wit U, u don't even know y the Sky Is Blue
Bitch can't you tell, I'm The truth, look at yo watch, it's Time To Lose
good flow with the multi, forced wordplay, played diss
I'll never be as blind as U, I couldn't lose to you if that's what I Treid To Do
Buy a Clue, I straight up conquered you..... Like America after 1492
good flow, coo wordplay, straight punch
You're whack, and battling me is stupid, so Why Do It
I stay on wax, you shouldn't even be on a "track", unless your Tied To It
good flow and multi, decent wordplay, decent punch
Your toughest challenge, I can do while Takin A Shit, without Energy
I Lyrically Rip MC's that steal their names from Memphis "Bleek"
You just Little Geek, your mouth's dry, how could you of Spit wit Me
coo flow, weak wordplay, weak diss


Overall, Truth got this. He had punches, the flow and the wordplay. Work on your creativity a little more & wording. You've elivated a lot since I first saw you round here. Bleek, work on forming punchlines, a more complex flow, add some wordplay and creativity. Keep at it mayne.


Vote - Datruth29.

this was an uneven battle the truth took it in the first line i did'nt see any punches from young_bleek,truth i liked your structure n ya had some decent punches in your verse but you werent up against alot,bleek some good rymes but jus weak flow n no personals made ya lose this..jus keep elevatin... vote/datruth29

can ya return the favour:http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134020

this needs votes 2:http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...ght=truth+a.k.a

Truth got this one easily. Bleek gotta start pressin enter before lines so people can read his shit easily. Truth came with better punches. I loved that one line about bein tied to a track. That was the illest. No hate, but bleek gotta elevate.

Vote - Truth

Vote on my battles:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133759

or this: http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134111

Thanx cuz...

I'm in Lyrical Rapsody cuz.... Me, Eyedentdy, Will Nova, and a few others, you know what I'm sayin? keep it up though man, just stucture your verses better, and start crafting your punchlines, you feel me? It's all good.. wun...

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alright this ones pretty obviouse. no offense.
Young
Your need to structure your thought's an lines. You wwere all over the place. Although the content wasn't horrible the ste up was. Also, you need to insert some more wordplay, it will help you out alot in the form of originality and creativity.
Truth
Nice punches. Good flow. Pretty nice metiphores as well. Your wordplay was remotely faint tho. Work on that. Otherwise you had a pretty solid drop. I think you took this one pretty easily.

No hate.
Vote/DaTruth

Drop an Honest Vote on the battle's in my sig. Thanks.

Upping