joval8 v.s GEE
 

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Ill Spit First

dis is ma first battle an i aint dat good but w/e:

Dawg, we aint beefin, im too good 4 u/
u so scared u look like fuckin Scooby doo./
An My flow aint evn gold status, its multi platinum, just like ma chain/
Stainless steal, like ma body an brain/
Damb my rhymes are insane an u, u aint even in the fuckin game/
Dawg ur so lame, id be a disgrace 4 u to even try to pronounce ma name/
oh GEE ur so dumb that ull probably forget to battle cause u had to pee/
Now im on ma nees celebratin ma victory, countin ma cheese an smokin some trees/
I do dis shit of tha top of ma head/
an for u its already been read/

go..

Joval8, I can tell anal satisfaction is your wish/
fuck you bitch, I'll "pop" you out like Janet Jackson's tit.
M.I.A...Culo! This "ass" didnt tell me the rules/
even Will Smith told me your pussy "pit" smell like "bull."
Come to the westside, youll get fuckd up like Lincoln/
no you wont get fuckd up the ass if thats what youre thinkin.
I'm ridin in a beamer, this bitch thinks I'm done/
get shot in the face like Christina, but I aint talkin bout cum!
So as an ending I'll let the voters r"8" your rhymes /
fuck the escalator you need somthin quicker ta elev"8" your lines.

Good shit, good battle...Uppin for some votes.....

ya good battle son. thats was tight

uppin......

comeon yall gotta vote 4 dis shit........its not that hard yo................................................ .................................................. ............................

he murdered you with those barz dog...

v/GEE

aight overall yall was both about the same from a lyrical standpoint, but i think GEE took this one with a few harder punchlines, and your closer was pretty decent

joval this line right here"oh GEE ur so dumb that ull probably forget to battle cause u had to pee/" was complete garbage dawg, that line made me have to give me vote to GEE. no beef though, just tellin u

Uppin again.................................

Wack ass battle...
But anyways...Gee got this one with his better verse ,and his punches were waay better too plus some hit hard also...Joval's verse sucked and plus his punches were weak...and they didnt even hit hard..So overall Gee got this one sided battle with his verse and punches....

v/Gee

uppin for vote...............................needin one more

Uppin for one more vote..............................

Joval8
dont put the /s at the end of ur lines...its newbish...structure was pretty good...flow fell off a little...u had a few metas...wordplay was wack...a few of ur punches barely connected...no good personals...

GEE
dont put the /s at the end of ur lines...structure was good...flow was on target...no metas....wordplay was good....some of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Overall
Joval8 had more metas...neither had good personals...GEE had the better structure...the more stable flow...better wordplay...and more connecting punches...so basing off of that...GEE gets my vote...

VOTE - GEE