Joval8 v.s Mixtape
 

aight, atleast 10 lines. u spit first.

Checkin.....in.................................... ....................

Fuck Joval written speechs can break screens & reach out of it...
Bitch gets hounded with boxer gloves hiding six pounds in it bitch...
Joval you're of a weaker algebra...
I ring shots from my metallica through a silencer to silence ya...
Open your mouth and hand in tips...
Of my fingers probing for the explosive to detach it’s clips...
I’d take your best shot but you ain’t even landing hits...
I’ll blast this bitch and be surprised if he tries to answer this...
Your head contains waste like a glass of piss...
You ain’t ill enough to be this cancerous...


Drop ur's ........

ey, yo tape ya rhymes are fake an u as soft as cake/
once u challenge me theres no way ull escape/
An U think u pretty tuff... dont u?/
But if u fuck wit me its gua get ruff/
I aint that pussy that u can go mess wit, im that dik that ull shoot u up real quik-/
In a hurry, its no worry to me/
I no that i can be wat ma mama said id be/
She said id be rich, id have money an power/
But yo moms was fuckin otha dudes in tha shower/
I got a reputation, but u is a coward/
Watch how i pile up all these votes in less than an hour/

Vote=Mixtape

Came better.Joval came with those weak punches.Then he got on the mama thing.Leave that out cuz he doesn't help you.Mixtape also had nice flow.Joval did too,but his punches were garbage.Mixtape wasn't that great either,but they were better than what Joval came with.

I'll poll when somebody vote on my battle,cuz I did take the time to read this shit!

mixtape got this pretty easily.. two different levels of batling.. he actually had some nice metas.. punches were coo.. neither had personals.. flow was better.. and structure was alot better.. vote goes to mixtape hands down..









http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134057
in elevated front lines i also have a batte with TRASE and restricted.. hit either one of the three up..

Mixtape
structure is good...flow is on target...u had no metas...wordplay was ok...some of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Joval8
dont put the /s at the end of ur lines...thats newbish...structure is ok...flow falls off a little...u had a few metas...wordplay was wack...none of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Overall
Joval8 had more metas...neither had good personals...Mixtape had the better structure...the more stable flow...better wordplay...and more connecting punches...so basing off of that...Mixtape gets my vote...

VOTE - MIXTAPE

PLEASE return the favor with an honest vote on the link in my sig...thanx...

I liked Mixtape's verse a lot. He had good punches and kept it poetic. That was tite. Joval came with some ordinary disses that I wasnt really feeling. Mixtape had a good structure that helped the verse flow good.

Vote - Mixtape

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Uppin for my man mixtape......................

Structure: Tie
Flow: Tie
Word play: Mix
Openor: Mix
Closer: Mix
Punches: Mix
Vote: Mix

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uppin' this fa my nigga
good luck, mixtape
~wun~
*kisses*