e-dubz vs killa cam
 

iight 8-10 lines, due 15 mins after check in..no later
no hate crew or d/r votes, blind spit

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i merked him already, he want it again? iight here it is, i went soft on dis nigga

‘throw ur whack disses’ at me..... cuz i love to ‘catch joke’
if you had ‘drugs ‘n cling film’...... u still couldnt ‘rap dope’ (wrap dope)
this kid took ‘stage classes’ n ‘viagra’....... jus so he could ‘act hard’
attackin this clown from front and back....... leaving his back scarred
if you was a mail man tryin to rap......... you still couldnt deliver a verse
tryin again? your not on my level im finished battlin you its time we disperse
i spit at you for a reason...... cuz your the one who aint gifted with rhymes
time u up and leave the site i already merked yo ass, u jus makin it 2 times

yo fam u gon spit soon.. i said 15 mins

you knocked me out the first time but iam back for round 2
but not to only win but to fuckin barry you

your dayz are over so you can take off my crown
because the real king is here not this chump ass clown

so i gust your cold pussy meaning my dead bitch
sorry i had to kill him but i was dun fuckin this thrick

it was good while it lasted but it time for you to go
i picked up the win (and e dub he lost agin)

Dipset bitch

eh e-dubz yo rhymes r ill man, i gotz 2 give u ur props

yea..

edubz:lol,heard that acting with viagra line,but its funny ne way.. had some nice metas.. flow was good.. nice drop



cam:it was an iiite drop.. i think you need to focus on metas, and punches.. maybe lok for recent posts on edub, and make fun of em ? i dunno.. just tips to help you elevate.. good effort tho.. stay up




v/edubz

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thanks fo da feedback..uppin dis shit

E-Dubz Drop:

‘throw ur whack disses’ at me..... cuz i love to ‘catch joke’
if you had ‘drugs ‘n cling film’...... u still couldnt ‘rap dope’
PRETTY NICE OPENER TO START IT OFF 7/10
this kid took ‘stage classes’ n ‘viagra’....... jus so he could ‘act hard’
attackin this clown from front and back....... leaving his back scarred
HAHA LOVING THIS WHOLE THING 8/10
if you was a mail man tryin to rap......... you still couldnt deliver a verse
tryin again? your not on my level im finished battlin you its time we disperse
FIRST LINE WAS HOT 2ND LINE WAS NICE 7.5/10
i spit at you for a reason...... cuz your the one who aint gifted with rhymes
time u up and leave the site i already merked yo ass, u jus makin it 2 times
OK CLOSER 6.5/10

OVERALL: 7.5/10


Killa Cam's Drop:

you knocked me out the first time but iam back for round 2
but not to only win but to fuckin barry you
OK....SPELL BURY THE RIGHT WAY BECAUSE
YOU WEREN'T USING WORPLAY 5/10
your dayz are over so you can take off my crown
because the real king is here not this chump ass clown
NOPE DIDN'T MAKE ME LAUGH & I
WASN'T FEELING IT 5/10
so i gust your cold pussy meaning my dead bitch
sorry i had to kill him but i was dun fuckin this thrick
DECENT 5/10
it was good while it lasted but it time for you to go
i picked up the win (and e dub he lost agin)
SORRY BUT I DIDN'T LIKE THA CLOSER 4/10

OVERALL: 5/10

VOTE GOES TO E-DUBZ

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vote e/dubs

he had punches,flow,stucture was ok he had some funny ass lines

killa your shit sounded like a freestyle son..you had no punches you was just talkin..elevate

Edubz won this one hands down. I liked his metas and his wordplay. He had some tite lines in his verse. Killa lost this one cuz he didnt come hard at all. His rhymes werent that creative either. Edubz takes this battle.....again.

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‘throw ur whack disses’ at me..... cuz i love to ‘catch joke’
if you had ‘drugs ‘n cling film’...... u still couldnt ‘rap dope’ (wrap dope)
iight..iight..good opener..nice 8/10
this kid took ‘stage classes’ n ‘viagra’....... jus so he could ‘act hard’
attackin this clown from front and back....... leaving his back scarred
haha first line was hot..second line was iight 7/10
if you was a mail man tryin to rap......... you still couldnt deliver a verse
tryin again? your not on my level im finished battlin you its time we disperse
once again...the first line was good..but the secod was iight 7/10
i spit at you for a reason...... cuz your the one who aint gifted with rhymes
time u up and leave the site i already merked yo ass, u jus makin it 2 times
whack closer..whack...5.5/10

27.5/40

you knocked me out the first time but iam back for round 2
but not to only win but to fuckin barry you
lol..whack opener..pure weak 5/10
your dayz are over so you can take off my crown
because the real king is here not this chump ass clown
whack..just exploitin yourself hate that in rhymes 5/10
so i gust your cold pussy meaning my dead bitch
sorry i had to kill him but i was dun fuckin this thrick
again..exploitin..no punches..5/10
it was good while it lasted but it time for you to go
i picked up the win (and e dub he lost agin)
WHACCK..lame..type weak 5/10
Dipset bitch

20/40

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