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.gunit101 07-09-04 06:50 PM

.gunit Vs eB
 
Here's the rules...

10 lines...
No crew, hate, d/r votes...
No feeding...
Blind spit (doesn't matter who drops first)
Due in 45 minutes after you check in


This is my check in.....check in and I'll start keying

eB 07-09-04 06:52 PM

i'm Here So Just Start You Verse Man, Hope Your Prepared.




-eB

.gunit101 07-09-04 07:24 PM

Why does it take everyone forever to drop 10 lines?

eB, hmmm.....makes me wonder what kinda bitch e B
Needs to elevate...looking up's only time he'd see me
Think you ballin? I'm strong in the post...nerd, he heard me
Dragging him through the mud...so he's rockin a Dirrty Jersey
This game's over bitch....easily I had him bleed by the pen
Used to losing, so for a pep talk he sigged..."please try again"
Get off my nuts faggot.....that's what he seems to be after
Take a look at his name and you'll see that he'll 'Be' backwards
So humble, he bows down.....leaving this dude's mark when
He comes to polish me off.....and leave my shoes sparklin

eB 07-09-04 07:28 PM

You Think You’re A Spittin’ Cock Sucker?
Your Just A Cocky Ass Mutherfucker.
HaHa And That’s All You Got?
Better Turn Up The AC Cause I’m Too Damn HOTT.
Your Probably As Ugly As You Sound.
Most Deffinetly The Gayest Cat Around
With Yo Boyfriends Is When You Get On The Ground.
That’s Why When You Wip It Out Your Dicks Brown.
What’s Your Record The Loses Must Be Accumulating?
The Way You Spit Is Just Straight Humiliating.
Ooo My First Battle Goin’ Down In History.
Glad It’s Over So I Can Celebrate My Victory.



-eB

eB 07-09-04 07:36 PM

Comments?
 
Any Comments Anyone?? We Want FeedBack, Or Votes Atleast...

.gunit101 07-09-04 08:41 PM

Why the fuck ain't anyone voting?

Drop some links and we'll hit your battle up....

SONIC 07-09-04 08:51 PM

Because tjuis battle is whack and prolly coz you don't vote on know one's battle..

but I have to say after reading the battle that gunit won that battle... eb didn't even rhyme at times and had no punchlines, no metas, no nothin..
gunit, you need to elevate also though, you can do a lot better..

v/gunit.. return the favor and drop a vote in my shit..

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133998

SONIC 07-09-04 08:54 PM

and if you need a better explaination, Accumulating and humiliating doesn't rhyme gb

G 07-09-04 09:23 PM

"HaHa And That’s All You Got?
Better Turn Up The AC Cause I’m Too Damn HOTT"
-eb

^Thats gotta be the weakest line Ive seen since I got on this. Gunit took this...like Truth said, eb didnt have ANYTHING in his rhymes. Gunit had some good punches and an alright opener. But this battle was one sided.

Vote - Gunit

Return tha favor: http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134111
or on: http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133759

eB 07-09-04 09:44 PM

HaHa Alright i Dont' Know If You Fail English But Accumulating And Humiliating Do Rhyme Check Your Pronuciating. And As For Returning Favors Your Battles Shouldn't Need Favors Returned. This Shit It Bogus.

SONIC 07-09-04 09:46 PM

^you're mad coz i didn't vote for u... lol

eB 07-09-04 09:50 PM

Ignorant Bastard
 
Man i Don't Care If You Dont' Vote For Me. Honestly This Website Doesn't Mean Anythign To Me. i'm Just Sick Of Ignorant Fucks. Atleast Know What Your Talking About. Every Line Rhymed Too Brah. You Were Talking Out Of Your Ass.


-eB

Black Pantha 07-09-04 10:13 PM

Dis was A very weak battle

But Im gon have to go wit............

EB
Both yall need to elevate. Eb that was a horrible begginin
didnt see any punch lines
and any metas
Also try to legnthen ur lines
aight
overall-5/10

G-unit
Ok verse but u could do a whole lot better
U had an Ok structure but not enough punchlines
Also u just need to up yo vocabulary
overall-7/10

ELEVATE
v/G-Unit

Black Pantha 07-09-04 10:16 PM

Vote on my battles which r currently
I dont know how to leave links but they will be at the top of FRONTLINES

HellRaor vs. Black Pantha
Explicit vs. Black Panther

Yehti 07-10-04 12:25 AM

-Gunit101.
eB, hmmm.....makes me wonder what kinda bitch e B
Needs to elevate...looking up's only time he'd see me
coo multi with the flow, aight wordplay, played out punch
Think you ballin? I'm strong in the post...nerd, he heard me
Dragging him through the mud...so he's rockin a Dirrty Jersey
coo multi, aight wordplay, aight punch
This game's over bitch....easily I had him bleed by the pen
Used to losing, so for a pep talk he sigged..."please try again"
aight multi, aight wordplay, sig disses are played out
Get off my nuts faggot.....that's what he seems to be after
Take a look at his name and you'll see that he'll 'Be' backwards
aight multi, aight wordplay, played out nameplay
So humble, he bows down.....leaving this dude's mark when
He comes to polish me off.....and leave my shoes sparklin
straight multi, coo wordplay, coo punch


-Eb.
You Think You’re A Spittin’ Cock Sucker?
Your Just A Cocky Ass Mutherfucker.
average flow, no wordplay, weak diss
HaHa And That’s All You Got?
Better Turn Up The AC Cause I’m Too Damn HOTT.
average flow, straight wordplay, not really a diss/punch
Your Probably As Ugly As You Sound.
Most Deffinetly The Gayest Cat Around
coo flow with the multi, aight wordplay, played out diss
With Yo Boyfriends Is When You Get On The Ground.
That’s Why When You Wip It Out Your Dicks Brown.
average flow, straight wordplay, aight punch
What’s Your Record The Loses Must Be Accumulating?
The Way You Spit Is Just Straight Humiliating.
average flow, aight wordplay, weak punch
Ooo My First Battle Goin’ Down In History.
Glad It’s Over So I Can Celebrate My Victory.
average flow, no wordplay, weak diss


Overall, G got this. He was a little stronger with the punches and had a better flow. G, work on your wordplay, creativity, and wording some. Eb, work on your wittiness, wordplay, creativity, and consistency with flow. You're doin' aight for your first battle. Keep at it mayne.


Vote - Gunit101.


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