la la vs gotaasswhoopin4u
 

10 lines
house rules
u spit first

checkin in...and i thought you said you was droppin first?
btw, what are tha house rules cuz i dunno em...i go by first to 5 votes wins, 3-0 ko, no d/r or hate votes...

no i didnt...house rules mean no crew..no d/r...and no crew votes...
go drop...

*smh* when i was your age i wasn't a little girl like you are...i'll drop in a minute...

damn, sorry for takin so long, i forgot i had this window open and i went downstairs haha...enough of this fuckin around, this cat's shook so i guess i'll drop first...

This is practice-for-me, why battle me if you're after-glory?/
Cuz tha only reason I won't rape you is cuz of statutory/
I maim-wit-a-knife, got ya brain-in-a-vice prayin-to-Christ/
And you only wanna change ya name cuz I came-to-tha-site/
I'm takin-ya-Life, and I ain't talkin bout your box-of-cereal/
I cock-Glocks and pop-shots then botch-tha-serial/
Before I even dropped a bar he said "Sha-please-don't-hurt-me!"/*
Get crazy-in-Jersey and leave fucked wit scavies-and-herpes/
I'ma send-em-to-Heaven at 13, this baby's-unworthy/
Now he's Seven-Eleven, plus his bitch gave-me-a-Slurpee/*

*Sha is short for Shane, that's my real name...
**his record would be 7-11 after i beat him, 7-11 tha convenience store, slurpee is their drink, blah you get tha punch...

damn, that shit took me 6 minutes to key (and it's wack cuz i just kept typin and didn't go back to fix shit, nor did i care), and this cat wouldn't drop in 10...*smh* stop takin so long and drop a verse so we can get some votes...

look at ya weak verse, i thought tissue paper was softer...
ur still a free agent and ur never gonna get an offer*...
im ahead of this socalled emcee by hundreds of miles...
u can drop a "g" for this battle u still wouldnt be "worth" my while...
he got clowned off his old site and came over here...
damn a name like "la la", and i thought "tha Q" was the only queer...
he came to this site talkin shit so his ass could be popular...
my rhymes is choppin-ya, damn u had to close a window jus to make ur own shit hot-to-ya*...
jus cause u battlin the best, u aint gon get respect...
here "la la" i hope u feelin the "direct effect"*...

*in his profile, under crew name it says "free agent"
*he jus said that he had to close the window downstairs in his house
*his name is "la la" and thats the chick that hosts "MTV Direct Effect"

Breakdown for La La...........

This is practice-for-me, why battle me if you're after-glory?/
Cuz tha only reason I won't rape you is cuz of statutory/

Nice wordplay...Good opener 7/10

I maim-wit-a-knife, got ya brain-in-a-vice prayin-to-Christ/
And you only wanna change ya name cuz I came-to-tha-site/

Wasn't feeling punch 5/10

I'm takin-ya-Life, and I ain't talkin bout your box-of-cereal/
I cock-Glocks and pop-shots then botch-tha-serial/

Don't like self hype punches but it was ah'ight 6/10

Before I even dropped a bar he said "Sha-please-don't-hurt-me!"/*
Get crazy-in-Jersey and leave fucked wit scavies-and-herpes/

tight punch 7/10

I'ma send-em-to-Heaven at 13, this baby's-unworthy/
Now he's Seven-Eleven, plus his bitch gave-me-a-Slurpee/*

ok closer 6/10


Breakdown for Gotass



look at ya weak verse, i thought tissue paper was softer...
ur still a free agent and ur never gonna get an offer*...

Horrible opener....4/10

im ahead of this socalled emcee by hundreds of miles...
u can drop a "g" for this battle u still wouldnt be "worth" my while...

decent punch 5/10

he got clowned off his old site and came over here...
damn a name like "la la", and i thought "tha Q" was the only queer...

Weak punch 4/10

he came to this site talkin shit so his ass could be popular...
my rhymes is choppin-ya, damn u had to close a window jus to make ur own shit hot-to-ya*...

Seriously stretched an wack 4/10

jus cause u battlin the best, u aint gon get respect...
here "la la" i hope u feelin the "direct effect"*...

Ok who didn't see the direct effect line coming, weak.....3/10

This was a really one sided battle La La took this one hands down

Vote: La La

yo all LA LA's lines could be fuckin PRE WRITTEN OR BITTEN OR USED...cuz she didnt use any personals....imma vote later..im too tired now

^^^she? i'm a dude, and there isn't any personals cuz i don't know who tha fuck he is, quit dickridin him and hatin on me...i keyed that verse in like 5-6 minutes, i've never prewritten in my life, and i said that i left tha internet window open, not a window in my crib lmao...1-0 uppin for more votes please

btw, triple n you gotta vote on tha poll thing too cuz it says 0-0 for tha battle standings...can a mod please clean up tha freepost in here too?

ehh...i didnt kno that...be specific, uppin for votes...

^^^??? i dunno what you're talkin about but yeah, 1-0 uppin for votes, this shit is fuckin dead...

up for more votes, and i don't want state capitol votin on my battles...1-0 uppin

uppin again...damn, i gotta go vote on other battles now........

Lala had the better verse in my opinion. though the verse was kinda stretched and multis werent used effectively, the punches were a lot stronger than Asswhoopings and some personals were used (however wack they may be)
v/lala

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