Lethal Lunatic vs killlah
 

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Its my first battle in- im comin around
when this cat spit next- im layin em down
you dont want see a nigga- im spittin tha truth
if you ask me who's crazy- I'll say it aint you
watch and believe- ill spit some names
ya crew gonna be like "oh this niggas insane"
if you notice my name- they say imma killlah
Im going easy on you - ill just rock ya chin chilla
It aint nothing to me to spit some line
so watch ya mouth down and take ya time

Like wen I take ecstasy- lookin at this bitch next-to-me
He just the one next-to-be- broken in half non-flex-ably
It’s like the war/fight music- released in the air and let it breath
Like a fag who neva knew it- blood that neva tries to leave
I’m a gun this lil bitch down- till there’s actually nothin to kill *
Discover you’re a clown- ya head is empty so I’ma start to drill
Up to my seventh line- and I’m already merkin this faggot
Like the age of time- this fag created a pussy habit
We’re just seven years apart- and your still not above-me
Like a broken heart- ya still screamin no one wants to hug-me

* Look at his biography it says that he’s a gunna.......Kill= killah

bumbin this shit dont sleep on this
will return the favor

come at me lunatic set it up and I'll go first now the time and this the place
Know what Im talking bout

this was pretty onesided and i really think lethal took this one easily

Its my first battle in- im comin around
when this cat spit next- im layin em down
man you can put your self in a verse saying im new!!
you dont want see a nigga- im spittin tha truth
if you ask me who's crazy- I'll say it aint you
lol...decent personal
watch and believe- ill spit some names
ya crew gonna be like "oh this niggas insane"
naw not really feelin that
if you notice my name- they say imma killlah
Im going easy on you - ill just rock ya chin chilla
WTF makin up words... creativity ..lol
It aint nothing to me to spit some line
^^^not a good closer at all

lethal
like wen I take ecstasy- lookin at this bitch next-to-me
He just the one next-to-be- broken in half non-flex-ably
decent opener
It’s like the war/fight music- released in the air and let it breath
Like a fag who neva knew it- blood that neva tries to leave
decent punchlines but seen you do alot better
I’m a gun this lil bitch down- till there’s actually nothin to kill *
Discover you’re a clown- ya head is empty so I’ma start to drill
not really feelin that line
Up to my seventh line- and I’m already merkin this faggot
Like the age of time- this fag created a pussy habit
okay decent but not feelin the second line
We’re just seven years apart- and your still not above-me
Like a broken heart- ya still screamin no one wants to hug-me
lol...funny ..

structure:tie
punchlines:LL
multies:LL
personals:LL
enjoy reading :LL

overall vote:LL
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Lethal Lunatic took this. This battle was pretty uneven. LL had good punches and personals including a good closure. There wasnt really anything special in killahs rhyme. Keep elevatin though. No hate. LL took this one with ease. LL gets the vote...

Vote - Lunatic

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ayo i'm alittle confused why did killah spit. i mean he new he was gonna lose ok first his shit was mad weak and vocab plus punches sucked.

big up to lethal it was still simple but the flow and vocab and punches were better.

LL didn't have much competition, but he still squashed killah, killah yo rhymes was too basic and your punches were weak. you shoulda tried some metas or a little bit better wordplay, well shit, some wordplay period, no hate, just come harder next time, my vote goes to LL

Lethal...overall your verse was nice..and your punches were good also...they hit hard too..well some did...you had some nice structure ...and you had a decent flow and had some good vocab...Killah really didnt li thing from him his verse was decent...but overall elevate...

V/Lethal Lunatic

uppin for some votes
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I can't vote, but i'll leave some feedback...

Lethal took this with better wordplay, and he had better punches, although killah had some nice personals, he just needs to work on them and maybe word them better.

Killah has potential, he just needs to elevate a little...

killah :

Its my first battle in- im comin around
when this cat spit next- im layin em down
^^basic and filler 3/10
you dont want see a nigga- im spittin tha truth
if you ask me who's crazy- I'll say it aint you
^^weak 2/10
watch and believe- ill spit some names
ya crew gonna be like "oh this niggas insane"
^^more filler 2/10
if you notice my name- they say imma killlah
Im going easy on you - ill just rock ya chin chilla
^^dammit stop usin so much filler 1/10
It aint nothing to me to spit some line
so watch ya mouth down and take ya time
^^decent 4/10

overall : 12/50 (24%)

L.L :

Like wen I take ecstasy- lookin at this bitch next-to-me
He just the one next-to-be- broken in half non-flex-ably
^^some filler in 1st line but good multies 7/10
It’s like the war/fight music- released in the air and let it breath
Like a fag who neva knew it- blood that neva tries to leave
^^filler 2/10
I’m a gun this lil bitch down- till there’s actually nothin to kill *
Discover you’re a clown- ya head is empty so I’ma start to drill
^^decent punch good personal 7/10
Up to my seventh line- and I’m already merkin this faggot
Like the age of time- this fag created a pussy habit
^^decent punch basic 5/10
We’re just seven years apart- and your still not above-me
Like a broken heart- ya still screamin no one wants to hug-me
^^lol funny good closer 8/10

overall : 29/50 (58%)

vote: L.L his verse was obviously better he had some decent punched good structure and used a decent personal good verse...killah elevate in all areas start talking about your opponent and less about yourself

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