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Triple_N vs Marvolous

Ah'ight son here the rules
NO D/R Votes
NO Crew Votes
You spit first an I drop 20 mins after you
Begin spit after check in

Ah'ight son here's my check in, good luck............

U drop a hot verse ha!!, I got a better chance of seeing hailey's comet
But ya verse is entertaining, I always liked reading marvel comics
I see a lot of bullshit in the weak ass rhymes that you write
U must have cancer cuz dats the only way u "da sickest on the site"
This'll be over quick, cuz you 19 yrs old an still have no kinda wit
Eating too many chilli peppers is the only way ya ass gon drop hot shit
U pose to have a marvolous J but in the post all u shoot is bricks
Ya punches are always close, but u ruin more prospects than NY knicks
Ya wack post skills always have ya verse comin up shorter than infant pricks
Even if u were a "NBA hall of famer" u still wouldn't be a "Hardwood Classic"

both had good flow
both had straight structuere marvs was a lil bit better
but punches marv urs was corny maggie simpson come on lol im givin it to triple for his 4 personals 2 ur 1 thats what decided this cause it was real close good keystyles from both but tripl got it with his personals though both came kinda played

ok both could up the vocab but it was a keystyke so both was straight
both could work on creativity a lil bit
marv work on them personals playa
triple work on them multis son
but good battle from both

I think Triple won this. His punches were just a bit harder. This was a really close battle. Both had good structures which is hard ta find on this site. Good battle. Triple had a lot of peronals like the sickest on the site. I think he got this battle cuz of those. Big ups to both though...this was a really good battle.

Vote-Triple

Vote on these:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134177

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134111

I REALLY LIKED THIS BATTLE,MARV:I WAS'NT FEELING YOUR PERSONALS,BUT YA HAD FLOW ON LOCK,I THINK YA COUD'VE COME A BIT HARDER THOUGH
"CLOSE BATTLE
"TRIPLE N "DAMN"DAWG I WAS REALLY FEELIN YOUR PERSONALS N LIKED THE WITTY LINES,YOU HAD GOOD FLOW 2,I THOUGHT YOUR PUNCHES WERE WHAT WON YOU THIS
VOTE/TRIPLE_N

PLEASE RETURN THE FAVOUR:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134020
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=130025

God Damnitt,my Votes Not Gonna Count Cause I Don't Have 100 Posts,how Do I Know If I Can Vote On Battles Like This,?were Does It State That You Need That Many Posts In This Thread,cause This Is The 2nd Time Tonight N I Don't Want Ta Waste My Time N Post Stupid Votes If Its Not Going Ta Count ! Can Some1 Please Pm Me About This Im "sorry Emcees For Wasting Your Time"..........i Jus Dint Know........

oh 4 dickheads dat aint dat maggie simpson line if u watch a shit she neva grew up...so datz whut im sayin 2 him...and da sickest on dis site..personal been abused uppin 4 real votes

triple n i think dis punks crazee,actin like i wont pull da tool and dump 80-
said u dont care about rb but da "net stay on ya dome" like a "lunch lady"-

get ya money up,hussle marry pimpin,cuzz jay everybody glad he spittin-
dis n real immature he'll "neva grow up" he saught of like "maggie simpson"-

those wear fairly weak punchlines with weak newbish structure
good wordplay though..7/10

he gotta write ryhmes 4 me no talent dis fagget cant think of da head-
wanna fight on aol all dis "spider man" nigga wanna do is "swing on da web"-

fukkin with jay dunn dat cannon a waste,cops a find ya fam in dem lake's-
u real homo look at ya "avatar" u really wish u was on top of "canibus face"-

i been da sickest on here 4 a while now and all da bully's cant budge me-
ya crew cant say im week,by da way they rap da "jury" cant "judge" me-

the ending was tight...rest was fairly weak.. your wordplay on those wuz weak
ur rhymes werent making much sense overall verse 15/10
75%
tripleN
U drop a hot verse ha!!, I got a better chance of seeing hailey's comet
But ya verse is entertaining, I always liked reading marvel comics
I see a lot of bullshit in the weak ass rhymes that you write
U must have cancer cuz dats the only way u "da sickest on the site"
This'll be over quick, cuz you 19 yrs old an still have no kinda wit
better strucutre and becuz of ya strucutre better flow
the first line was nice!!
Eating too many chilli peppers is the only way ya ass gon drop hot shit
U pose to have a marvolous J but in the post all u shoot is bricks
Ya punches are always close, but u ruin more prospects than NY knicks
Ya wack post skills always have ya verse comin up shorter than infant pricks
Even if u were a "NBA hall of famer" u still wouldn't be a "Hardwood Classic"
^^ fairly weak ender but good punches and solid flow won you the battle...

Uppin for some honest explained votes holla back!!!!!!!!

Can we get some honest votes on this please!!!!!!!!!!!!

aight both verses came up kinda weak.marvolous ur verse has to have some kinda meaning.try makin an opener thats a hard personal cause u had a weak opener.then a hard next punch then keep goin.u had flow but then again u had a weak closer. overall a pretty bad verse. triple aight flow could use some meti rhymes to keep a good flow always do that if u eva do audio. good opener.good closer.strucutre ok try breakin up the lines itll look better. also some of those lines were played out like cancer the only way ur the sickest and hot shit wit chili peppers.played out but it was enough to take this battle both keep practice

v/triple n

marvel had better wordplay but the llines he used werent very strong even tho they were dope.

Triple N......omg u called me played before what the fuk was this

I see a lot of bullshit in the weak ass rhymes that you write
U must have cancer cuz dats the only way u "da sickest on the site"
This'll be over quick, cuz you 19 yrs old an still have no kinda wit
Eating too many chilli peppers is the only way ya ass gon drop hot shit

hot shit & sickest lines are so fukkin played.

But u came slightly harder.

vote triple N