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Lethal vs hmp
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You're a hoe, a joke, so by now you should be used to getting laughed at...
you could carry brass knuckles and your punches still wouldn't pack Jack... I'm about to make an example out of you kid, call this an all-out assault... mighty talk won't do nothing but, place you on the sidewalk traced in chalk... You couldn't pay me enough to go easy on you so you could out top me... You'll never out top me and I'll prove it when they perform your autopsy... I split crooks wit shit books, hang em' out to dry on fish hooks.. Rip their flesh from the bone,take pictures and ask my next challenger how this looks... You ain't shit rook(ie),fingering animals doesn't make you enough of a vet to test me.. There ain't no such thing as chest protection, I'll make your vest bleed... you're the best, leave! Cause,giving blow jobs is the only way you'll suck-seed If we ever meet i'll tell you "fuck you" but,I don't want to give you the impression to fuck me quick key good luck |
(starts off slow)
they say we're all here for a sebliminal purpose... ...some govern churches, some live worthless lives under the surface. /1 my job, sentence and reason will bring murder to season... ...simply appeasing gods will to treason this life with a soul beatin. /2 (things pick up, as thoughts of life and death shoot through my mind) the systems persistant, yet your blatant to risk it. lifes like expenses, spent on the clock and its not water resistant. call lethal R Kelly's assistant, the millitant of elementry sex interests. my wills blunt yet precise, lethal take my advise. not a price could realize the size of debt that contrasts to Jay-z's ice. unfineshed verse. blah |
this was an okay battle not the best I every seen
Openor: HMP Structure: Lethal Flow: Tie Personals: HMP Punches: Lethal Enjoyed: Lethal Vote: Lethal Good shit but I was feelin lethal more on this one Closer: Tie |
LethalNJection
structure is good...flow is on target...u had nice metas...wordplay was tight...most of ur punches connected...no personals... HMP structure is good...flow is on target...u had some metas...wordplay was decent...some of ur punches connected...u had alright personals... Overall HMP had more personals...both had a good structure...as well as a solid flow...LethalNJection had more metas...better wordplay...and more connecting punches...so basing off of that...LethalNJection gets my vote... VOTE - LETHALNJECTION PLEASE return the favor with an honest vote on the link in my sig...thanx... |
This was a pretty good battle. I liked HMp's opener cuz it was kinda creative but didnt have a punch or personal in it. But it was still tite. I think Njection took this because he had better and hard hitting punches. He also had a good flow to his structure. HMP dint have many punches in his verse...but I still liked it...it was koo..
Vote-Njection Vote on these: http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134177 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134111 |
thank you will return the favor uppin
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Opener:Both...
Structure: Lethal... Flow:Both... Personals: iam say HMP... Punches: Lethal... Enjoyed: Lethal... Vote: Lethal... Overall lethal got this battle with punches and his verse was much better.... V/LethalNJection |
Opener:Both...
Structure: both Flow: Both Personals: lethal Punches: Lethal Enjoyed: Lethal Vote: Lethal ayo it was a waste of time this shit is easy to tell who won |
lethal: your flow was really good. with nice strucutre and wordplay... it was really of tha hook...one of the best verses i seen from you good punches and personalz and you used the fact that he's a rookie against him..it worked out nice ovrall *8* mbp you had nice flow witch was caused by your exelent use of multies.. you had good rhyming and evrything.. with complex vocab.. but you didint throw enough punches lethal in jectionz just came harder with punches.. thats why he won... my vote lethal |
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