Killlah vs Supercilious
 

:shoot: enough said

go first

the way i keep pumpin rhymes you can call me the gas man
if you roll through my hood im pumpin one at ya gas can
i been to the devil and back and hells hot
just be cautious cuz you might find somethin stinkin in ya mailbox
and my shells hot...i make ya moms throwback bottom bells rock
so go ahead and jump stupid and act griddy
cuz my heat would probably put da lights out in ya whole city

If i see this nigga and he a block away
Im have his bitch ass doing tha rock away
not to say- a nigga aint down for some blastin
I got niggas in tha hood thats ready for some action
Yo talk hood but nigga- you just actin
hold ya tounge lil man b4 my gun get to smackin
If you wanna see some heat playa
Take ya ass to Miami and take a seat playa
He came hard this nigga sound like X
Get at me nigga before I dump in ya chest

vote

nice drops from both of you, i haven't seen a truley grimey set of verses in a second. so props to the utmost on that alone. but here's the judgement

supercilious-very gutter, i liked it a lot. what stuck out to me is this line
i been to the devil and back and hells hot

that line was great, and it just lead in to greater lines lines. like the standout of the whole verse-
and my shells hot...i make ya moms throwback bottom bells rock

That shit was NICE! throwback bottom bells, that's hot, i wouldn't be surprised if some didn't get it though, cuz i didn't at first. then i put it together. bottom bells=bell bottoms, throw back bell bottoms. HOT

killah-nice opener.
If i see this nigga and he a block away
Im have his bitch ass doing tha rock away

i definately like the swagger about the line.
the problem is that because of the hot line it had me expecting more, and i'm afraid for the rest of the verse, you didn't deliver hard enough. over all it was a decent verse just not good enough to get over. props though.

v=supercilious

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uppin for votes...................

i have to say that killah hAD THE EDGE
I MUST DISAGREE WITH MAKU


V-KILLAH

both verses lacked complexity but killah to simple super was kinda short but he had the edge

check it:
super:u had a nice flow and you had a nice way with your words, punches were good,u had some raw lines, it was hot..
killa:ur structure was ok, but some of ur lines didnt rhyme,, like the last couple when u were tryin to get ya point across that way, but it was a decent verse overall
VOTE:super

opener:killah
close: neither
personals:killah
metas:killah (wanna c heat, go to miami and take a seat
puches: neither

v/killah


good shit both ya'll

killah: nice opener and overall good verse... keepin it g
super:nice verse i liked the line: i make ur moms throw back bottom bells rock that was original... kinda short though
v/super

supercilious : i liked ur shit up 2 da line about his momma... all momma jokes are played out!!!!!! it was kinda sad 2 see a very hot verse destroyed like that :( its kool your shit was tight tho

killlah : i liked yo verse alot it flowed good and everything just seemed 2 be connceted... so u got my vote

vote/killah

plz return da favor iight? vote on any one of my battles.../honestly

Horrible Battle
Both verse reall sucked. The Punches,personals,vocab,etc was all lacking.
But since super came a tad bit harder with punches,he gets my vote.

v: super