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Prephix 07-10-04 01:47 PM

openmic, holla gimme sum feed back!
 
yo this the prehistorical scribe, check it out this jus an open topic flow! holla!:::::::::::::::::


yo, I came to this world as a hispanic kid/
In my area your defined by who your friends are and kids you sit wif/
So I grew into a more defined individual/
Leavin behind sad cats like bad residuals/
Got into rappin just as a habbit, done it all through Jr.High then I started battlin'/
Freestyle came first, it feels like I been rappin since a was first birthed/
Won like everytime I versed this git/ Felt really tight even though he couldnt even spit/ Came into high school, met Noah and Matt/
Matt made beats and Noah laced rap/
Nick could spit that underground shit/ But this one git, I jus call shibbi, thinkin he Jay-Z- and p. diddy/
My flows were 2 times better then his/ But yet he had the nerve to tell me ta practice/ But my journey in rappin has only begun/
No doubt I will rise to the top and be number one/
Look me and Tate already killin em'/
If we see anyones brains no doubt we spillin em'/

this flow really sucked, but I am really bored, so if someone wanna battle, lemme kno and we'll go to "bitch slapped"
Prephix.
................ahhhahhhh!

YaYo 07-12-04 07:25 PM

NICE....... i was feelin it yo keep on elevatin


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