EyeDentdy V.s. XxXtasy
 

Unlimited bars/lines
no gender punchess
U know the rest of the normal rules.
no beef. friendly battle
post Ur verse 30 mins after check in.
since Im here now, I'll go first, no feeding off my verse either.
Good luck ma'

I'll knock X out, like 2 747's hittin structural buildings/
my punchlines k.o. pedestriens....without Yeilding/
wit flows that spread like deseased children/
U aint in my league like handycaped kids wit no feelings/
make U defencively move wit static/
U cant run these Tracks(songs), U asmatic/
U'll collaps befor my lyrical attacks hit the mic/
Mentally combust into dust in a chicken fight/ (sorry,thats gender)
Eyedentdy intensively'll snatch a dyke/
have niggaz screamin, "clear, clear" and Resurrect this battle back 2 life/
If I signal for the beat to drop, U'll catch a heart attack/
talkin smack'll get U exactly that, plus a broken back/
from the over use of Ex, so go ahead and hate me/
Even if U was raised in Harlem, U still wouldnt shake me/
XxXtasy's been dodgin breakfast a lot lately/
But fuck it, U toast, and I breaks bread daily/

The chicken fight, is suppost to represent XxXtasy in a "chicken head" fight wit one of my bitches.
If U have any other questions, just ask away. I'll explain

go ahead and do Ur thing. G/L

im the top of your head,im the truth that is said/
i spit what's to be said/so my shits got u sacred/
pull out ur pen & paper..cos u the one learning from me later
nigga if u listen to my jam..u'ld en up shaking like u got amnesia/
i aint trynna feed or what..but ur spit didnt mean a word
mine be filling cups like bud..and urs be filling holes like mod
if u looking for my stucture..fuck it cos i spit according 2 the presure
my skils are like a house built on a rocky foundation..
i bet thats why u were longing to be praised outta what i mention
nigga glue ur hand to the screen..cos im trynna give u an easy rap lesson
immagine urself in the cemitery wherre ya moma gon burry you,cos my crew and i be crushing u
till u had enuff of the bursting u..then u give up saying "u the best and i honor u"
thats why im the illest that has finished u..
i aint said this to u....that....im untouchable...iight?

*lmao...wack ass verse...this aint my damn style but..i kinna rushed the end didnt type it well but immagine it fresstyled all fast ;)

uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!for them votes....
gd luck to u too :thumbup:

Lets get votes in, I saw alot of creativity in Ur rymes, U just need to learn to connect them.

Yooooooooo, wtf, I need to get some battles closed, win or lose, Iv got peaple talkin shit and look like a bitch if I cant battle them cuz Iv got too many battles going on. just vote as honestly if U can. drop a link and we'll vote in Ur battles honestly.

vote eyedenty thought he came stonger both flows were good though

^^^that would be DQ'd cos u didnt xplain.....

more votes yo.....!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11

Tru, I dont think he voted tho ok. lets get some votes in here.

holy fuck y'all greedy with ya votes or what??????????????????????????????????????????
vote on this bicth pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee................lol ...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!:(

ok, first off. eye, the opener had way 2 many syllables, u needed to say what you wanted to say with less words, like the word structural prolly wasnt needed, the second bar was better, but the metaphor in it didnt make make much sense, handicapped children arnt in your league.. bah it wasnt bad rhymin tho, the third bar was good wordplay, i liked that line. 4th bar was ok, 5th was playin on gender which u said u didnt want but it finished ok, and the word doctors prolly woulda made more sence there, the next bar was ok, and the last 2 were ok, but the closer i didnt relly get the diss.

overall, could of been better, but it wasnt that bad.

Xxxtasy, your opener started good, second bar was stretched, third bar, i think u meant to say mud, but that still doesent rhyme real good with word (no r sound).. the next bar.. was skipped.. it started ok, then there was no second line in it which messed with the structure a bit, bar afta that was alrite, then the bar after that had the same problem as before, you skipped the second line.. and the closer was ok, but drop the iight? bit..

also X, 1 thing, i cant stress how bad it is to say that your verse was wak after you write it, in battles your meant to be right 100% of the time, no 'i think' or 'my shits wak' u have to seem like your on point all the time, it can change the way people think sometimes.. but dont worry bout that, im over looking it.

this was hard to decide.. but in the end i gotta give the vote to eye, you both came about the same but he didnt mess his structure up near the end of his verse.

interestin battle tho.

Thanx for the words of wizdom, I dont wanna act like I didnt try but at the same time, I kinda had a battle going on on RB original so I my attencion wasnt completely in niether this battle nore the other. they were mixed a bit.LOL we need more votes in this piece.

ok i give this to eye. he had the punches and multis and everything made sense. what sealed it for him was the line "Even if U was raised in Harlem, U still wouldnt shake me"

vote: eyedentdy

hey vote in my battles plz i wud really appreciate it.

umm dis shit was wun sided....first let me say somthin 2 nigaz rap period "rappin" is makin ya words "ryhme" if ya shit dont ryhme then u might as well just talk ova a beat...and x dat was u basically did ya shit was not ryhmin 4 nothin so u basically lost rite there..let me break it down tho

opener-eye...x said and sacred dont ryhme lol
structure-eye...x ya lines was 2 fukkin long
punchlines-eye
multis-eye
creativty-eye
personals-nun
finisher-a tie
enjoyed-eye.....ofcourse dude just came harder his ryhmed and it was neat so datz good enuff da win dis shit x step ya game up dunn

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