datruth 29 vs. create
 

yup this is a battloe

aight here go the rules once agian

yo ten lines
you got until midnight my time to drop
no d/r votes
no biting
no hate votes
no bull shit
you spit first

if you take longer than midnight this battle will be closed
i will drop after i check in

yO..
10 LINES
DUE AT 12:00 AM
WEST COAST TIME..
NO CREW VOTES.
NO D/R


OK, WE COOL NOW, IF YOUR VERSE DOESN'T COME BY 12:00 AM, IT GETS CLOSED

no kid my rules or nothing..have it closed i dont care it just shows that you a bitch

yO MAMA'S A BITCH, I'LL GO FIRST, HOLD ON

go ahead with your prewritten shit...and dont forget to check in

^ hE'S nERVOUS, LOL



Check It,

When I spit real Shit, Everybody "feels me", like a Hot Masseuse
I've Read Yo rhymes, U not "Creative",It's like I'm Battling Dr. Suess
You'd be Blinded patna, coz you ain't never Seen "Datruth"
You're like life on mars... most people don't Beleive In You
U mad coz I Steal Whips n Feel Chicks, show u how raw Skills Get
Real Spits, You just got "LIFE TWISTED", like a Double Helix
HE TELLS ME TO GO FIRST BUT WATCH HIS VERSE BE MO WORST
U is so Burned, I'll slap u fast enough to travle time n disrupt Yo Birth
U Don't Got a Name, Fuck up yo "stucture", till yo don't Got a Frame
I'm comin dope, cut ya troat, or disrupt ya "flow" as I Clog ya Vains
We're Both from Cali, But Your rhymes are cheaper than a Pinto
Plus he's from da boring version of L.A...weak ass "Sacramento"

Watch this nigga feed off of me..

http://community.rapbattles.com/pri...wpm&pmid=199665

He still aint wrote No Verse... Ok, Watch. this dude is fake, U make Cali look bad..
you need hella time..

...like constipated eskimos your never droppin hot shit

ur not evn fully developed so how u gona get da bigga picture`
dis aint a kodak moment its ur death in sum lyrical scriptures`
cant see me i gto proof..poof.. i spit invisible like magicians`
my mythical mic tradition get me feelin physical like positions`
rite a bar on my fist in dis exbitition so u can feel my punchlines`
i cant trust these premature mcs who lust for life dats sublime`
believe me i speak da truth..i got more bars then blacksmiths`
i smack kids...this clumbsy child always is droppin wack shit`
stated dat i aint living up to my name..who cares wat u think`
ur infantile comprehensions has ur demise rapped up in a link`

...real quik spit ......

datruth - meh, that was pretty bad....ur flow was good.....but ur punches were weak....u basically wrote sentences....no hot metas....work on better personals...just keep elevatin give it a 6.1/10....

creativitie - ur creativity of course showed in the link punch....u came pretty damn weak...but ur closing punch beat him....u no wat ur doin so no reason to give advice....keep battlin and get back into the grrove...give it a 6.9/10.....

vote - creativitie

This is gonna be Dqed Cuz