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WillNova Vs Killlah
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manage to kill and killah, on sum real thug shit//
Imma savage u quick and let sum real blood drip// I'm drunk as fuck and kno u can't see me// u from NC, where my peeps lay, real family// uncannied, altopsy in ya bra and panties// u feel ya self, I move crowds like stampedes// u came in handy, I was in need for a easy win// leave u laid out in my front yard like dirty recylcin bins// can't contend, I have a fetish to see bodies twitch// put a hole below ya abdomen so now u really a bitch// seen u flinch, coward thinkin wat Imma do now// see me as James Brown tellin u to get on down// ur unwound, wide open, ur prevail was a fluke// it not the remi or the heni, ya presence made me puke// |
aight nigga, its wateva... just go out and do ya thang thang.... give them wat they want
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This bitch nigga real rough right
what I gotta do to make him see the light First of all nigga -I got clips for days I dont see dead people -till they trip this way you aint trippin though yea ya peeps know why Ill leave'm dead on the streets wit a bullet to they eye And my streets know why - you aint ready for some gun play Buy a plane ticket but just make it a oneway I dont have to explain my ill intentions Just know that if you come, prepare to get missin All I got to say this this cat Nova I got that Ether so you smoked like Hova |
Aight people lets get sum votes in, so we can get this started
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Come on people I got 5 battles going on right now, I need sum space... start doing ur part and vote... still uppin as always
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wat the hell, can sumbody vote on this battle.... oh sorry bout to lose my temper.... uppin fo votes
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Aight...I'mma vote i know how u feel.....
Will manage to kill and killah, on sum real thug shit// Imma savage u quick and let sum real blood drip// (ok line) I'm drunk as fuck and kno u can't see me// u from NC, where my peeps lay, real family// (kinda week) uncannied, altopsy in ya bra and panties// u feel ya self, I move crowds like stampedes (not really feelin' that one) u came in handy, I was in need for a easy win// leave u laid out in my front yard like dirty recylcin bins// (not bad) can't contend, I have a fetish to see bodies twitch// put a hole below ya abdomen so now u really a bitch (good) seen u flinch, coward thinkin wat Imma do now// see me as James Brown tellin u to get on down// (kinda weak) ur unwound, wide open, ur prevail was a fluke// it not the remi or the heni, ya presence made me puke// (was ok) overall not a bad verse pretty average Killah This bitch nigga real rough right what I gotta do to make him see the light (weak) First of all nigga -I got clips for days I dont see dead people -till they trip this way (not bad could have used it better) you aint trippin though yea ya peeps know why Ill leave'm dead on the streets wit a bullet to they eye (OK) And my streets know why - you aint ready for some gun play Buy a plane ticket but just make it a oneway (kinda weak) I dont have to explain my ill intentions Just know that if you come, prepare to get missin (kinda weak again) All I got to say this this cat Nova I got that Ether so you smoked like Hova (not bad kinda short) Overall I think Will had the better verse...his punches hit harder and flow was better Vote Will Return the favor...drop a honest vote |
Battle was pretty slow on Killlah's side, just didnt really come with punches. A lot of gun talk...you cant really use that online. Your guns dont matter here, put on your boxing gloves and throw some punches. It would be good for you to add in some multies and some tight metas, check out their avatar and come up with some personals...and some tight rhymes. Keep ya structure a lil bit tighter and ya flow will be on better....no beef, big ups just elevate.
WillNova a few good punches, flow was right on i noticed how you started a few lines with rhymes from the last bar...I do that myself in some rhymes, pretty tight. Not really any decent metas, or good multies, throw some of those in for a factor. Pretty good verse over all though. V/Willnova My Young Lewis battle needs some votes if you all dont mind...thanks. |
WillNova
manage to kill and killah, on sum real thug shit// Imma savage u quick and let sum real blood drip// ->>ok multi but punch was weak 4/10 I'm drunk as fuck and kno u can't see me// u from NC, where my peeps lay, real family// ->>this doesnt rhyme at all 3/10 uncannied, altopsy in ya bra and panties// u feel ya self, I move crowds like stampedes// ->>weak rhyming good punching 5/10 u came in handy, I was in need for a easy win// leave u laid out in my front yard like dirty recylcin bins// ->>weak punch second line stretched 3/10 can't contend, I have a fetish to see bodies twitch// put a hole below ya abdomen so now u really a bitch// ->>this was my favorite line 6/10 seen u flinch, coward thinkin wat Imma do now// see me as James Brown tellin u to get on down// ->>doesnt make sense 3/10 ur unwound, wide open, ur prevail was a fluke// it not the remi or the heni, ya presence made me puke// ->>good closer 6/10 ->>total:30/70 42.86% killah This bitch nigga real rough right what I gotta do to make him see the light ->>filler 4/10 First of all nigga -I got clips for days I dont see dead people -till they trip this way ->>weak punch 4/10 you aint trippin though yea ya peeps know why Ill leave'm dead on the streets wit a bullet to they eye ->>weak rhyme gun talk is annoying 3/10 And my streets know why - you aint ready for some gun play Buy a plane ticket but just make it a oneway ->>good punch but gun talk is still annoying 5/10 I dont have to explain my ill intentions Just know that if you come, prepare to get missin ->>kinda weak rhyme but ok punch 4/10 All I got to say this this cat Nova I got that Ether so you smoked like Hova ->>decent closer 4/10 ->>total:24/60 40.00% Willnova really had this in the bag but killah had a good effort. will: work on making sure that it rhymes good like say it out in your head a lot and just keep elevating killah: just elevate your structure, get more length to your lines and get a LOT more creative...gun talk is played the %'s look like im hatin but you gotta think a 100% is like winning the tournament so gettin a 40% is not really a bad thing especially when you are still elevating v/willnova \/hit these up honestly\/ |
will had to kill the 1 that thinks hes ill. lol juss fukin around. but yea will fuked u up man. he had good punches. u had no punches and if u did they were so lame i didnt notice. also sum of ya shit didnt ryme "I dont have to explain my ill intentions
Just know that if you come, prepare to get missin" thats an example. i go wit will vote: will |
ima vote nova becuz he had betta punchez, flow, rymez. and personelles. and hiz stuff all rhymed, so ima vote fo nova. killah had no puchez. i like nova's first line, thug shit and blood drip.
vote=nova pleeze leeve a honest vote on this battle: http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=135812 thanx, werd |
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