shYtown vs LethalNjection
 

10-12 lines
due in 30 minutes

you spit first

goodluck

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dis nigga is arrogant, i beef and speak hate//
fuck a marovich, pull out the PISTOL for pete sake/("pistol pete marovich")
ok now its my turn im bout to spit this shit quick/
im like the aids virus an ill make you sick/
you cant rhyme but im like a street poet/
im rippin a hole in ya ass an u gona have ta sew it/
ill omit you from this rappin shit cuz u have no flow/
your rhymes lack rhythm like a baker with no dough/
your rhymes remind me of a blabbin retard/
walkin around slobbin like a blind st. bernard/
now you stumbling around like a leg amputee/
cuz your ice cold but my shit is hotter then the *third degree/
yo as is useless like da roc without jay-z

yo turn homie ..... good luck

iight battle..shytown ur punches didnt hit hard and some were played concepts, the sick wit aids lines i hear all da time..u had iight flow and structure was good
lethal nice punches and u had good flow

spit sick leave your brains blown so homes gets his name known...
i'll take ya dame home and leave Shy's dames brain boned...
^nice bar, good multis and nice punch

overall lethal had a better verse, good multis, flow and punches
v/lethal

shYtown your shit was simple and the punches i didn't really get.
lethal nice
personals: lethal
flow: l
style: s
punches: l
opener: l
closer: l
vote: l
best line: your dread disses is a bitches approach, not vicious as most...
i'll wait to you pop up then you bitches is toast...

iight uppin for some more votes please will return the favor

drop a link

Didnt think that this was a good battle, Clear winner though. Lethal had better punches/personals and his structure and flow was good, where as Shytowns was all over the place.

v/Lethal

return the favour here: http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134328

lethal injection took this battle easy, he bet shytown in every catagory n although this was a wack battle lethal njection gets my vote

vote - lethal

drop a vote on this link

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134062

thankz will return the favor right now...

please one more vote

sad battle.....shytown you pucnehs was weak as fuck......verse was sad and stupid as fuck.....need to elevate alot kid.....rhymes was a little off and shit.....Lethal your shit was okay.....your punches was okay they could have hit alot harder but you didnt really need to come hard so its okay

v/lethal for a better verse