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realmurk 07-11-04 02:11 AM

realmurk mixtape part 1: Southern Pimp INTRO
 
I spark tools and it's true I could feel ya wit lead/
homeboy the only reason ya hot cause a chic wit a STD probaily gave you head/
If you had a deal they a say you was the best cause ya battled me and now ya dead/
you only realy hot when you die and there ain't no more Pac or BIGs/
I could be the one to report it to ya family and friends/ that half of These niggas wanta be G's and they life pretend/ the type to get a wife and for her life they spend/ cause they think the girls fine/ I'm a pimp, a bitch of mine don't get a dime/ that's what I try to tell them / cause I don't buy dreams I sell them/ I'm a young nigga wit a OG head for brains/ I got a range so I don't steal nothing but a bitch mind through game/ I'm on track that's just how I ride it when attentions undivided that's when you tell a ho she misguided and undecided/ the hood no all the news so ain't a damn thing private/ I try to keep it smooth making dough selling crack in high school/ thats just my rules I'm a senior and I bang wit piru's/ And if you ain't no, they gangs in the south to/ Nigga!!! :shoot: :shoot:

realmurk 07-11-04 02:36 AM

tell a nigga what ya'll think bout this !!!

realmurk 07-11-04 03:44 AM

tell me what all ya'll think bout this shit here Shaty!!

realmurk 07-11-04 04:09 AM

This keystyle is hot if you don't think so say something read people I need feedback
oh and vote in the battle section with me versus da joka it's a topic battle about a drug deal gone bad so vote on who's deal went badder know what 'm talking bout
hollalol

realmurk 07-11-04 04:16 AM

upping for feed back

J Gutta 07-11-04 04:34 AM

aight nigga slow down ya lines...elevate ya punches..flow iz aight,,get a betta structure..then u be fine but u elevated frum wen i first saw yur verses dawg B-Real dawg wun

realmurk 07-11-04 03:22 PM

do CD's sell buy motherfuckers reading the artist rhymes nah they fucking listen structure don't got a damn thing to do wit ya flo it comes from the spiter how he spits ya'll on this site can't read just my rhymes and say what help I need cause from what I red fom most of ya'll pound for pound I'm the realist the best and the greatest waitill my new speakers come it's time for takeover ya'll done fucked up

shadow 07-11-04 04:14 PM

you need to fix up ur structure kinda boring other than that nice job.. hit up my collab with legacy


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