MARVOLoUsJ1009 VS truth a.k.a
 

aight 10-12 lines you drop no less than 5 min after,house rules
i'll drop in 5 min aight,n honest votes please

AIGHT,

Battling me is a 'DUMB MOVE' like 'playing leap frog with a UNICORN'/
Left u scorned...talk shit? I'll have your 'lips' TORN worse then porn with new-BORNS/
after this RAPPING-FIGHT I'm stealing the "first amendment", so I know I'm walking away with the "BRAGGING-RIGHTS"/
Cause Marv’s like "porno vets" in "virgin roles", he's only "ACTING-TIGHT"/
Not a single soul will come to your "wake" after I SHRED-YOUR-ORGANS, cause "kids
sleep on you" like you rest on a single bed with SEVEN-"ORPHANS"/
There's no chance of my "ankles and LEGS-DEVORCING", cause "de feetin' me" is like getting a blow job from the HEADLESS-HORSEMEN/
Truth’s the rawest alive, with chords in his wrist and two mics in the PLACE-OF-FISTS, my existence alone will replace the faith of an ATHEIST/
God's a SATANIST, after this AMAZING-DISS you'll need an AIDS-ASSIST just to TAKE-A-PISS/
"Kurt Cobain" takes me in "vain" cause even God CALLS-ME-DOPE, write the RAWEST-JOKES that put kids in such an AWE-OF-QUOTES that when they come to their JAWS-ARE-BROKE/
If you wanna BRAWL-WITH-FLOWS you'll get hit from "all directions" when ATTACKING-ME, cause Emceez who "front" get "left" "right" in "BACK"-OF-ME/
You're WACK-TO-ME, you see T's challenges? Smart foes REFUSE-THOSE, cause now R.B knows that battling me is a "grave error" like "mis-spelling TOMB-STONES"/

YO YOU GOT MAX 10 MIN,SO SPIT,GOO'LUCK

Sorry Dawg I Did'nt Think It Was Gonna Take That Long,don't Worry Bout That 10 Min Shit,jus Don't Take All Night....

YO,SICKIST ON DA SITE,WTF,YOU SAID YOU WOULD DROP RIGHT AFTER ME,AS LONG AS I WENT FIRST ,THIS IS BULLSHIT,DON'T EVEN BOTHER DROPIN YOUR VERSE,YA FINALLY GET A CHALLENGE THEN BACKOUT,I KNOW THE ONLY REASON YOU ACCEPTED THIS BATTLE WAS CAUSE YOU THOUGHT I WAS A NEWBIE,BUILDIN YOUR WINS OF ROOKIE'S,IM GETTIN YOU D'Q'd,FUCKIN PUSSY...............WASTE MY TIME.......

rb could tell dis prick is chicken,look at dem corny's bar's dis kidd is spittin-
cant keystyle everything he put up is like "nas album" cuzz "it was written"-

dogg pleez quit it u only spit on da net u was neva ryhmin on a track-
nigga da iron gon clap,and leave dis nigga "truth" dead "lien" on his back-
(lyin)

shit u had da take all nite writin me a verse i already proven u shook up-
ur garbage dogg only time dis dude "strong on bar's" is "doin a pull up"-

when i spit dogg they all watchin and stair,so u aint gota shot at dis here-
u new 2 site and already ya "times up" just like u threw ya "watch in da air"-
he talk about puttin a album 2gether pleez nobody a be coppin dis quer's-
when u get a sign ya deal a be worth whut a nigga get 4 mopin in "sears"-

u da worst rapper on rb i been on here 4 a few month's but u not lastin 2-
only way u could say u "2 sick" is if ya "moms" had "aids" & ya pops had it 2-

u real soft aint no part of u street,if i load up dem clipps and target u creep-
u'll have da get a vest & "guard ya grill" like da hood had "bar be que thief"-
dogg if i suck the y dude u look up 2 on here sayin marv dat dude's heat-
no audio's cuzz ya "flat lines" suck plus u aint got da "heart" 4 new "beats"-

16 dunny and u fukkin took all nite da write me a verse so i bounced...and y u writin ryhmes 4 da net dunn dat sad lol

truth is tha best cat i've seen on this site so far, marv isn't that bad either, he needs to elevate though...i'll drop a vote on this later...

Haha,you Say I Took All Night,voters Jus Look At The Time,i Took 19 Min,while This Cat Was On Line When I Dropped My Verse Then Suddenly Disappeared Till Today...check Yourself Homie,the Facts Speek For Themslves,did'nt Wanna Spit First In The Callout Because You Said Cats Write After A Drop,what Do Ya Think You Jus Did,fuckin Hypercrit.....

lol dickhead u could tell my verse wasn't written i had personals...u really wrote dat shit bar 4 bar talkin bout god n shit??? come on stupid and y da fukk would i write a ryhme 4 u lmaooo get da fukk out of here...but let da voter's speak they shit

as always props to both lyricists, and i say LYRICISTS, cuz most others on these sites are bullshittin, spittin corney lines. and you niggaz actually came out and hit us up wit a REAL battle. But here's the judgement.

#1, both of you leave internet rappin altogether, and put out records. i really don't wanna see another text from either one of you.

truth-excellent flow throughout the whole thing.

Battling me is a 'DUMB MOVE' like 'playing leap frog with a UNICORN'/
Left u scorned...talk shit? I'll have your 'lips' TORN worse then porn with new-BORNS/

excellent opener which makes reader want to read on.
and you didn't dissappoint, with numerous quotable punches, you kept us going, and left us with a nice ender, that i especially liked.

You're WACK-TO-ME, you see T's challenges? Smart foes REFUSE-THOSE, cause now R.B knows that battling me is a "grave error" like "mis-spelling TOMB-STONES"/

marvolous-kind of a weak beginning to tell the truth. the first four lines werent' that hot. but i saw potential so i paid attention.
how you came about things, is you seemed to build up momentum. you had my full attention at this point:

when i spit dogg they all watchin and stair,so u aint gota shot at dis here-
u new 2 site and already ya "times up" just like u threw ya "watch in da air"-

at that point i said, It's on. so for the remainder of the verse, you hit him hard and also left us wit a nice ender

dogg if i suck the y dude u look up 2 on here sayin marv dat dude's heat-
no audio's cuzz ya "flat lines" suck plus u aint got da "heart" 4 new "beats"-

judgement.

I'll give truth this one simply because his whole verse, start to finish was a powerful diss, and his flow was better. This of course was a close one. but my vote goes to truth.

if y'all could return the favor and vote on a small battle i need closed, truthfully, i'd appreciate it.

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Truth: wasnt feelin ya structure... but your flow was good. Punches were hitn miss.. but it was only like 1 or 2 that were weak.. which is ok.. youre wordplay was funny as shit.. nice work


marv: i HATE gangsta raps... anything with dogg, nigga, guns, street, hood, clips etc. is weak as shit punchwise, unless its audio and you have a voice to suit that kind of style.. .. your flow was fine, didnt fall off, wordplay wasnt bad, but wasnt that good either..

v/ truth

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