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One-Man-Band vs The black plague
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house rules 12 lines max ill spit first |
Yo, ima put a stop to this kids ego.. throwin hooks-at-ya-laugh..
cut this rook-inta-half.. kids got nuthin, just look-at-his-av..* droppin pre-writs, no comebacks, no personals? theres no place-fa-ya-style.. preparin lines months ago.. before i noticed that empty space-in-my-file.. Leave whats up-from-ya-neck in debris, crack ya whole column-n-set.. I got-him-in-check.. figured this guy out.. he just a wannabe-vet.. the sentiment climbs, youd stand a better chance if you rented-ya-lines.. even if i break your verse 2 quarters it still wont make sense-a-ya-rhymes.** Man, im not even tryin, this battle ima just diddle daddle-fa-fun.. record 4-0? cmon man.. name the last non-herb battle-you-won.. and dont even try diss me on flow, thats just foolish-so-save-it.. n' quit readin fairy tales, kid.. aint no way goliaths losin-to-david.. *he doesnt have an avatar **"quarters" and "sense\cents" |
No wonder this kids a one man band, no one can stand his wackness
Wishes he had a right hand man, but hes left alone when shit happens His rhymes are so unexplainable, he's got more astericks than shakespeare Cuz no one understands his shit, it gets filtered out, its like hes makin beer Look at his sig, how gay... "first there was the beat, then there was god" He aint got nothin left, he gets less respect than my man Ahmad Rashad It's like hes screamin from outer space..... no one can hear his words He hasn't done nothin worth while since his city hosted the Real World Just by lookin at his name, and his rhymes at the end of his lines... We can tell he's dashin just to get his battered ass to the finish line |
Sorry i didn't drop sooner, but i was only online yesterday for like a half an hour, so i just saw our battle today
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One Man Band-You had a good verse.You have good structure & flow.Your punches were good.
The Black Plague-Your verse was ok.The flow was ok.Your punches could have been better. Vote=One-Man-Band He gets my vote because he had better punches & flow.My advise is just try to add some multies in next time to make ya verse better. Hit one of my battles back,after all,I did take time 2 read this shit!!! |
daamn... i hate herb votes.. those "dashes" were multies my friend... and my structure was pretty much the same as his.. except divided in fours... and an even syllable count... just goes to show you have no idea what your talkin bout... but whatever...
uppin.........................^^^ |
Yo, ima put a stop to this kids ego.. throwin hooks-at-ya-laugh..
cut this rook-inta-half.. kids got nuthin, just look-at-his-av..* blah droppin pre-writs, no comebacks, no personals? theres no place-fa-ya-style.. preparin lines months ago.. before i noticed that empty space-in-my-file.. straight didnt hit hard Leave whats up-from-ya-neck in debris, crack ya whole column-n-set.. I got-him-in-check.. figured this guy out.. he just a wannabe-vet. nice multies the sentiment climbs, youd stand a better chance if you rented-ya-lines.. even if i break your verse 2 quarters it still wont make sense-a-ya-rhymes.** straight but not personal Man, im not even tryin, this battle ima just diddle daddle-fa-fun.. record 4-0? cmon man.. name the last non-herb battle-you-won.. soso and dont even try diss me on flow, thats just foolish-so-save-it.. n' quit readin fairy tales, kid.. aint no way goliaths losin-to-david.. dope punch No wonder this kids a one man band, no one can stand his wackness Wishes he had a right hand man, but hes left alone when shit happens decent His rhymes are so unexplainable, he's got more astericks than shakespeare Cuz no one understands his shit, it gets filtered out, its like hes makin beer soso first part is like what Look at his sig, how gay... "first there was the beat, then there was god" He aint got nothin left, he gets less respect than my man Ahmad Rashad nice It's like hes screamin from outer space..... no one can hear his words He hasn't done nothin worth while since his city hosted the Real World not hard hitting Just by lookin at his name, and his rhymes at the end of his lines... We can tell he's dashin just to get his battered ass to the finish line soso punch vote the black plague |
black plague: i was feeling some of ya stuff.. at the begging it was kind of slow..then it picke up in the iddle withthe punches..and then i felt like it fell off again a lil bit.. some of your punches didnt hit to hard.. some of em did.. verse was pretty inconsistant.. Decent drop overall..
band:the multies worked pretty niclely.. the multies made your punches harder because the punches were withthe flow pretty good.. id say the punches that hit, were hard and stuck to him... soem of em didnt hit hard tho.. overall pretty good spit.. id have to say that one-man-band took this.. PLagues verse just wasent consistant enuff.. but nice battle oyu guys.. http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134401 hit up this one when ya get a chance..^ |
Uppin this shit...
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Lmao... The little cracker changed his sig after i ripped it....(he said he's white)
Anyway, uppin... |
BLACK PLAGUE:NOT 2 BAD BUT LACKED IN CREATIVITY N GOOD ELEMENTS LIKE WORDPLAY,IT WAS JUS 2 SIMPLE, YOUR PUNCHES WERE AVERAGE,DINT LIKE YOUR FLOW..
ONE-MAN-BAND:LIKED YOUR FLOW,N I UNDERSTOOD YOUR MULTI'S,PUNCHES STARTED GOOD BUT I THINK YOU TOOK IT A LITTLE 2 EASY ON HIM ROUND THE END,BUT STILL SHOWED THE BETTER VERSE IN THE END... VOTE/1 MAN BAND PLEASE RETURN THE FAVOUR: http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134418 |
Uppin once again...
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one band man came hard, but i was feelin plagues shit better. he had harder punches and a more consistent flow, i like the real world line too, that line was tight. so my vote goes to plague.
yall return the favor here, and one band man, not sayin you gone do this, but dont drop a hate vote just cuz i voted for plague, that shit happens often. if you feelin hate then dont vote http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134795 |
umm okay nice battle....
one man band-ummm ya had a good flow...madd multi's dem shits dont win battles had a few punches and i aint get ya avatar personal cuzz he does have wun..overall ya verse was good but da multi shit is wack black plague-u had a good structure ya opener was hott,personals was good but some of ya lines were played but i think u won dis battle just off ya personals...if dis was a battle in da street would niggaz feel ya verse more my vote-black... http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...780#post1408780 ^^^RETURN DA FAVOR YA'LL...GON |
nah shit... i forgot bout that sig thing.. wasnt that good a punch anyway.. but..
"first there was the beat. Then the beat became god." - Kenny Muhammed was in my sig before i changed it.. for the voters |
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