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Cass Vs Datruth29
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when i battle niggas i leave em sick in da head..
an den dey have nightmares an wet they bed.. Cant knowbody in ya crew say CASS afraid.. cuz theyll get slapped on dey face like AFTER SHAVE.. an beforehand u betta start diggin ya grave... some where in da field like MASTA SLAVES.. If u da truth than u must be fakin// cause this is rap//stick ta masterbatin.. u think u beatin me u must be sadly mistakin... cause when ma punchlines drop theyll have the whole EARTH QUAKIN.... if u the truth than i must be god.. cause all ya punchlines iz small like pea pods.. Look man u beta stick ta livin life... cause ma punchlines rip threw u just knifes... U already know u cant beat cass in uh battle... cause ma lines be spankin u just like uh paddle.. |
He's below me, so to attack him, I have to Plunge At Him
I'm "doper" then U, but U keep trying "In Vain", like Drug Addicts You won't be able, I cuts em off when I Step In The Booth From the start I make sure that niggas like u aint "Stretchin Datruth" Right about now, you shouldn't wanna be on my Shit List Strong tactics, coz he's harder to get off my dick than Syphilis You should go to jail "THEIF",this man stole his name from "CASSIDY" I'll slap wit a force strong enough to put Insomniacs Ta Sleep your flow is Ragedy, I'll even have his mom watch this Man Get Merked Show her I'm da better man, then "Rock Her World" like da Planet Earth This Dudes a Newb, PMing me n shit with this n that, Sendin Questions he's So whack, I instinctively diss em before my mind Sends the Message |
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CASS:you tried i'll give ya that,but your only decent punch was so played i've seen it in the last 5 battles ,your structure needs work,along with your vocab,but ya verse was good for a newbie...
Datruth:liked your opener but dint like your closer,struture was aight,ryme scheme was good ,overall you had the better verse ...... VOTE/DaTRUTH RETURN THE FAVOUR N I'LL ADD MY VOTE: http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=130025 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134418 |
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Cass- ya verse was ok.....for a newb..you had some ok punches but still they didnt hit that hard...no vocab strucature was ok
Truth- ima give this one to you......your verse was just betta.it had betta flow and punches...your wordplay was betta then Cass |
This battle was sorta close,could have been better.Cass needs to work on structure fo sho.Also need better punches.But you have def got to work on ya structure.DaTruth verse alright.It was enough to get him a win.Both need to work on flow.Let me repeat both need to work on flow.Cass=work on structure.
Vote=DaTruth I'll poll when somebody checks out one of my battles:I did take the time 2 read this |
Naw, I ain't fuckin wit you^
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yo cass your shit was alright and same wit da truth but im gonna go with datruth just because your rhymes came more naturally when i was reading it but your guys skills are pretty close
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structure -truth
flow - tie metaz - truth wrd play - truth creativity -truth punches -truth personals -truth v - truth both verses were aight, cass let him self down wid wack structure n punches werent hard nuff n personals n vocab need work on... drop 1 on this link http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134062 |
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