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Golden shellz vs. Envee
son yo u ready?
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Yeh im ready 5 bars whens this due? u spit 1st!
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wen Golden shellz bring it u noe he drop it hard
this nigga here dont want he not ready 4 da god. i see u like shittin niggas well dats nice to noe well ive been rappin 4 a minute and i noe ima pro. wack lines, no game nigga wats ya purpose. this guys just like a ugly bitch wit dome hes worthless. |
'Fuccin' rookies these days man... I said 5 bars this kid spits 3 a'ight its 3 bars i guess...
Damn are my lyrics that hot or is ya bars really that cold... Cause shootin yaself before this battle is the only time "shells" struck “Gold”.... You reppin' BK well "Bloods Fly" and "Crips die" ya fuckin "Net Thug"... Ya Golden....... Well tha cops hadda look thro a river 2 find ya mug... You like south park? Well ill treat ya like Kenny and kill u each season... This kid is dutch "a goldmember" he likes 2 fuck men witout a real reason... Thats tha 3 bars right there.... Uppin 4 votes! |
Golden- you lose becuz you dont kno what 5 bars are lol.........sike naw ya punches were weak........no real wordplay....no vocab..........no multis ELEVATE
Envee- ya shit was betta cuz ya punches were betta........i like the one about Kenny even though it could have been betta.......your wordplay was betta it wasnt as simple as Goldens...... |
shit dog...im sorry but this was one sided, i dont even have that much to say, envee you was all ova this cat..your vocab is betta by far, your punches hit harder, what more can i say? you even had to compromise cos he didnt know the rules, this vote is easy..
peep my shit and return the fav |
fuck man they need to make a edit feature on this board, i forgot to add my link again heh
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134532 |
Uppin' Please Drop More Votes... Thanks For Tha Votes Guys!!
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OMG Golden-U need 2 Elavate That Was Shitty...But U A Get It Soon I Hope But On This You Got Yo Ass Whipped......
wen Golden shellz bring it u noe he drop it hard this nigga here dont want he not ready 4 da god. i see u like shittin niggas well dats nice to noe well ive been rappin 4 a minute and i noe ima pro. wack lines, no game nigga wats ya purpose. this guys just like a ugly bitch wit dome hes worthless. 5/10 Nice Vocab At Tha End Tho Damn are my lyrics that hot or is ya bars really that cold... Cause shootin yaself before this battle is the only time "shells" struck “Gold”.... You reppin' BK well "Bloods Fly" and "Crips die" ya fuckin "Net Thug"... Ya Golden....... Well tha cops hadda look thro a river 2 find ya mug... You like south park? Well ill treat ya like Kenny and kill u each season... This kid is dutch "a goldmember" he likes 2 fuck men witout a real reason... 7/10 Didnt have 2 Try Winner.....Envee |
Uppin' 4 votes....
Golden don't even worry about it u'll get better.. If you wanna elevate a lil quicker IM me on AIM, my name is DiamondDoggBld A'ight get at me ill help you out man... |
Pretty good stuff Envee, you opened up real hard with the personal punch. The flow was on point and consistent all three bars. Some nice metas, pretty good verse all around, missin a few multies though.
Golden Shellz ya gotta come with a battle mind, i dunno think your gonna kill you opponent or something. Just imagine your on stage and you want everyone to laugh at the other person, if not then your gonna get laughed at. You want to try and say something towards the other person to get a response from people. Because if the other person says something better then they are going to get the response. Your structure is good, just think on a higher level, come harder. Throw in some more multiple rhymes, some good metaphors. Get personal with it, look at his avator and so forth. v/Envee |
arright... no hate to anyone--- with that said- this battle was no contest... golden shellz brought the intensity of a drunken 4 year old 3 days away from dying of lupus... its true though... Envee you had 3 decent bars, with some funny punches... the first lines were the best though
Damn are my lyrics that hot or is ya bars really that cold... Cause shootin yaself before this battle is the only time "shells" struck “Gold”.... lol- structure aint perfect but the punch is solid and soo true-- Again no hate to anyone, but this was just an easy one to decide... I recomend Golden check out the tutorials on this site--- envee just keep doin what you doin... 1-- return the fav of an honest vote.... http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133452 |
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