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virt vs MarvolousJ1009
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jea...checkin in
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im gona go today...1 bar...go today or tomarow so the votes can get done...
with words that slay,you could only 'marvol-us' if 'spider man' was my name// and after this battle my crew would have given you '2 losses', so i'll call you 'cool j'// spider man and marvol comics.... LL cool J=two L's |
lol name and cool j ryhme??? okay my go!
virt is a week strange guy,u nice? nah i think some of ya teamates high- he luv his "crew" & like dem "tattoo's on allen's body" he neva gon leave "a.i"- *a.i=authentik intelligance his crew and a.i=allen iverson....and his tattoo's is 4 life u'll get da punch...GON |
with words that slay,you could only 'marvol-us' if 'spider man' was my name//
and after this battle my crew would have given you '2 losses', so i'll call you 'cool j'// ^^^good wordplay wit the first bar...the whole marvel-comics thing is kinda played but u made it work great with his name ur second bar was pretty tight also...more good wordplay and the punch was there pretty tight 8.3/10 u mad? cuzz da kidd in queens stay fly,u nice nah i think some of ya teamates high- virt luv his crew da he like dem "tattoo's on allen's body" he neva gon leave "a.i"- ^^^1st bar blah...flow was choppy and the set-up was kinda weak 2nd bar-i see what u were tryin to do with the a.i-allen iverson tat thing...but where was the punch? whats wrong wit bein down wit ya crew and supportin it and bein loyal? especially when A.I. is one of the best on this board...i wasnt feelin ya punch 5.5/10 Winner-Virt |
J and name ryhme...uppin for votes 1-0 virt
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lmaoooo how does J and NAME ryhme nigga???
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vote marv...
his shit was just neetah all the way around...... virt you did ight but you can do bettah |
Virt - that was stretched....nice meta....and creativity....but it didnt rhyme that well....i see how u sayin it rhymes...but not that great....decent punch....flow was off....give it a 6.3/10...
Marvolous - the punch didnt hit hard!....u coulda easily beat him if u had a nice punch....but u didnt....and ur flow was as bad as his....i give ur ish a 5.3/10.... Vote - virt |
2-1..uppin
do we go to 5 votes? |
no...first to get ahead by 6....KO = 8-0...
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Virt: with words that slay,you could only 'marvol-us' if 'spider man' was my name// and after this battle my crew would have given you '2 losses', so i'll call you 'cool j'// Explanation: whoa that was a hot punch in my opinion the 2nd line was a lil stretched but not much so its aight............................... flow was pretty good....but the best thing about this punch was the ill wordplay & a hard hitting punch also very original and creative I haven't heard anything like this before so its hot! made me laugh also lol Rating: 8/10 MarvolousJ1009: virt is a week strange guy,u nice? nah i think some of ya teamates high- he luv his "crew" & like dem "tattoo's on allen's body" he neva gon leave "a.i"- Explanation: aight its stretched aswell but I don't give a fuck about that shit anywayz.....flow was ok at best................................. aight....I could thought of that punch therefore no original to me sorry.....punch wasn't very hard hitting due to the fact you basically didn't really diss him hard! you just spitted he won't eva leave his crew........................................... Rating: 5/10 Vote Goes To: Virt (DUE TO A HARD-HITTING PUNCH..) |
lmaooo yo "rappin" is when u amke ya words "ryhme" he didn't ryhme...da nigga was basically talkin..and dude forsaken said he "couldn't think of dat" but then say it "aint original" whut da fuk is dat...3-1
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I misspelled it I was rushing the typing fam......
I meant to say "Could" |
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