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L.E 07-12-04 12:19 AM

Check-It
 
Justa warm-up song for my real shit...just wait to see the ish from me and Carson Jet...and maybe Re$tricted.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/6/l...ioncanmusic.htm

Its called "Check-It"

Up for Hot or Not

L.E 07-12-04 04:44 PM

Uppin' for some opinions...

*The~Star* 07-12-04 04:46 PM

The beat was nice,but your flow needs work.You was leaving to much space in-between.The delivery could be better also.Speak up was talking to low.That's about it.

Know-Gimix 07-12-04 05:18 PM

Im sayin you gotta put more effort into this- you just readin quietly into the mic- I can't understand chunks of this cuz ya voice is real low-- I think the way you were leavin that space in the delivery woulda been correct if you were feelin yaself and got a little agressive- Jus keep workin on it kid cuz you got the beat you just need to get into it.. 1

L.E 07-12-04 05:26 PM

Thanks for feed...yeah, I will spit more agressively...and post it.


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