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Check-It
Justa warm-up song for my real shit...just wait to see the ish from me and Carson Jet...and maybe Re$tricted.
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/6/l...ioncanmusic.htm Its called "Check-It" Up for Hot or Not |
Uppin' for some opinions...
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The beat was nice,but your flow needs work.You was leaving to much space in-between.The delivery could be better also.Speak up was talking to low.That's about it.
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Im sayin you gotta put more effort into this- you just readin quietly into the mic- I can't understand chunks of this cuz ya voice is real low-- I think the way you were leavin that space in the delivery woulda been correct if you were feelin yaself and got a little agressive- Jus keep workin on it kid cuz you got the beat you just need to get into it.. 1
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Thanks for feed...yeah, I will spit more agressively...and post it.
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