The Birth Of My Son-Today (READ)
 

June 12th the time 08:37/
The day my sons prescence graced us from heaven/

For 9 months u were undercover even 4 days late/
U gave mom 3 days of pain...but still we couldnt wait/

U came out holdin the chord like u were in despair/
Imagine our relieve when we heard ur 1st gasp of air/

And u cried until mommy got the chance to hold ya/
Eyes wide shut suckin ur thumb thinkin...
...how much these people love ya/

And for u being here i thank ya coz i finally know the way/
I'm gonn do erything in my power...
...to make sure u, me and mom never stray/

Or get taken away or you taken from us/
Coz we'd never hurt sum1 so little...
...coz its love we got not financial lust/

U a month old today and the changes u gone through are drastic/
No cone head smile on ur face not from jus wind...
...but still relaxed when u sleep u go like elastic/

U even makin noises like a lil version of a laugh/
U know me & u gonn get on lil pup we gonn have a blast/

I cant wait for the important days of ur life/
1st words, 1st step, 1st day at school...
...and the day u marry ur wife/

It's his 1st month today and Ethan i'm proud of you dawg this is Mad Dog rappin a tribute to his Mad Pup...Destined 2 Rhyme in this reppin in RapBattles they got ur back to this goes out to Vicki too...u looked after him for 9 months safely i thank you i love you girl...happy times are ahead...im out.

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yo man that was sum gud shyt ..
it really got me interested in the verse
Congradulations on ur baby

up this thread

yo mad that shit was good i wanna cry now an congrads on your kid man fa real pc

Mad pup you know that will be repin destined 2 rhyme soon
ha ha,..

Shit was tight mate hold it up, Can't wait for my wifey to
give me somthing so special,,.. Life.

this was dope mad-- alot of feelin in this, make a mufucker smile and shit.... stay up.... 1

yo that was tyt man. make me think of babies and all haha but its tyt yo i was feelin it

dis made me think bout havin a kid... then i remembered im only 15 n i got a whole life ahead of me

this makes me want to have a kid.tight shit and goodluck with fatherhood

ayo madd dog congrudulations on the baby. but night times ain't fun i warn u lol. my baby is wonder when he sleeping and i get to see my girls tits even more when shes feeding ha lol.

Yo thanx for all this great feedback and sniper tell me about it my lil boy kept me up ALL night Saturday lol but thanx yall uppin

aiyo man....nice job...dats all i gotsta say. U a strong man for lettin this shit off yo chest and all over da rap battles community. I respect ya for dat and I admire your heart fo your expression. congrats on da baby boy and keep dat shit up.
your verse was tight too man, dope ass hell...but most of all I'm congratulatin' u on your heart.

-peace-

nice drop dogg....hope your sons dong good nice touch of emotion in that verse
and imagery....i was feelin that

8.5/10

props

Not bad a nice verse WHEN DID U BECOME A DAD...on another note watch yoself

NiCe ShyT