DaTruth29 Vs. WiNC
 

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bLIND sPIT.... WE BOTH GO AT THE SAME TIME... AND THIS IS MY CHECK IN..

aight checkin in ..... lets get it......

...DaTruth29... Vs. ...WiNc...
lets see what i got tryin tah test myself against someone with a decent record...

"Da truth" can only be told where "truth" exists/
and the "truth" is that "Da Truth" is just a bitch/

he said that "i'm just me" so is everyone else/
"com'mon" be "original" don't sleep on yourself/

you can choke with dignity or key and get slaughtered/
come with your battle verse your records 'bout toh get altered/

that's your altamatum your "catch 22"/
or you could be a fuck up and "catch 2 in you"/

you've reached your limit of my lyrical exposure/
your verses wieght has fallen off your shoulder you not a tru soldier/

i'll let you get some votes cause i don't need a standin ovation/
i'd rather see your family pacin in icu like they have no patience/

your lookin at my verse in awe with a blank stare/
even if you came at me from the "left" i'd be "right" there/

He says he's from Oakland "cali" a "fornia" boi/
that means he's "forni"catin in the bathroom with a 4 year old boy/

that's a wrap your ass got "chewed"/
you got "masticated" like homemade food/

you can only speak "truth" where "truth" can be spoke/
but "DaTruth" can't speak cuz he startin tah choke/

damn that's 20 ... aight

"truth" play off his name...in his bio he said "i'm just me"
He's from oakland, "left""right" obvious,... eminems song i'm a soldier he talks about weight on his shoulders, "catch 22" or an altamatum when some says do this or this will happen basically, to"chew" is to"masticate". that should cover it for those who didn't undastand.

aight man i give yah the extra time but not too long brah

Yo

Check it

This fool is going down, like Atlantis as it Sinks At Sea
I'll spit 100 bars at this fagg before he can even "Winc" At ME
If you ever spit a good verse in yo life, sorry, I must Have Missed It
You should flow with Licorice instead of Mics coz U got "Rap Twisted"
You thought I'd throw a slider, but I went on to throw a Curve Through
Your so whack that I can train a Parrot to Serve You
You make me cry, you're so weak man, somebody Stop Em
Yo rhymes are "Dry Ass Fuck", like anal with non Lubricated Condoms
(Dry-Ass-Fuck, ya know.. a dry ass-fuck)
You make my ears bleed cuz, there's no way that U Might Win
My music's a sounds for sore ears coz I rap tight Like Skin
As I write the flow, it's obvious man, I am Dope
while yo "bars" wouldn't even be "Clean" if it were Ivory Soap
Aye man, You really need ta Go and Get Some help
U can't find it? Then I'll rip out yo spleen n show u yo "Inner" Self
I show Tactics, lyrically Slap Him hard enough to make em Back Flip
U lost but battling me is still a good thing Winc, it's good Practice

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Wow...Truth won this one hands down. He had good punches and some wordplay that shocked me. That Dry ass fuck line had me weak. Winc did pretty good. That one line about california was tite, even if im from cali. Good battle, truth took it.

vote-Truth

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Pretty decent battle.

The flow was on for both of you i could feel it in both verses. I think the tempo of Datruths was a lil faster, maybe a lil more feeling in it.

Punches, Datruth tied in a lot of metas with his punches, even a few personals so that made his pretty hard. He opened and closed pretty decent, the good practice line I was was just for laughs. I think wincs opener was a lil played out, ive seen the truth is and so forth on a lot of people. Winc did try to get personal as well talkin about where he lived and so forth. A few of the lines i wasnt feelin the rhymes, like ovation and patience.

Neither of you threw any multies, those really help to add creativity and also help your flow as well.

I think Datruth was just harder, and he came with more metas that were tied in with his punches,

v/Datruth29

This one wasn't bad....

WINC came wit some pretty played lines like the 'left' 'right' one, but he had a few nice metas. Flow was off a bit because he fluxuated between long and short lines. Overall it wasn't a bad verse, just needed some consistency, and maybe a really decent punch or two.....

DaTruth was a little bit better. His lines flowed pretty well because they were all even. He had a few nice metas too. I liked his consistency, but I guess he could have had a few more personals. Overall I think it was a well rounded verse and was good enough to take the win in this battle......

Vote - DaTruth
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truth is just good he beat him in all category on the real so vote truth

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