str8_hood vs. Maku JaiiLiin
 

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U just a kid to me so now im callin u son
Should had cats-eyes so u can see what a pussy you’ve become

U cant control the mic so we shouldn’t call this kid an m.c
He mad cause his bottle of preparation H(ass cream) is empty

Coming at me with lame flow and no tactics
Jus stick to the facts u’ll never beat me gay faggot

Aim my verse toward yo face so u can check it out and taste it
Ur flows ugly worse than Sam Cassel wearing braces

U rollin out like weed and im smokin u like a joint
Even if u sat on a needle ya flow still wouldn’t be on point

Even if you wit a crew, I’m solo-blessing you herbs//
So bad you go from 'straight hood' to homosexual burbs//
loss? I can’t see that path ,like~ traveling night-miles//
you got No time left, like ~ watches positioned in 'right aisles'//

J a i i L i i n

I know you’ve fucked your town of males//
You tried to Keep it on the low, like~ Mario winan’s album sales*//
What up Gansta? Really from Malibu-beach hood//
If you dropped worldwide, you cd’ll be lucky to reach “wood"//
I’ll operate on ya verse before you finish a sentence//
So the surgery was too early like~ performing a c-section on infants//

the lucky to reach wood, you know how you go gold, and platinum and all that...the rest you get.
*in that wack ass mario winans song he says keep it on the low, and plus its a diss because his album didn't sell. or won't.
the last one meant basically, you perform a c section on a fully grown pregnant woman, and it's too early cuz an infant can't even get pregnant.

ayo i aint wanna complain but u bit that line about that line about reaching wood was on that mtv rap battle yo. dont come at me with that bullshit

bitch what mtv rap battle?!?!?!

Don't come at you with bullshit? bitch! I'm an iller mcee then you! look that that box-mouth cliteris lips verse, ho.

youre taking the l and we both know this. Dr. seuss ghost wrote ya shit when he was four, and now you wanna act like you hot? slut please

let the voters decide, until then keep the little dick complex to ya self

I think MJ took this one. Hood didnt really have much lines in there that caught mah attention. MJ had that closer that was tite. It was a good rhyme and Mj also had that one line about watches or somthin. That was kinda clever. This battle was wack. MJ wins it though.

Vote - Maku Jaillin

Vote on this: http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134141

uppin 4 votes on this one!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

1st-Your verse ok,could have been better no doubt.I did like that line about Sam Cassell cuz he is one ugly ass person.But anyway the drop could have been better.

2nd person-Had a solod verse pretty much.Enough to win the battle,cuz you had better punches.Also nice flow and structure.

Vote=Maku JaiiLiin

uppin 4 votes on this one, if you vote on this battle i will return the favor.

uppin 4 votez

uppin 4 votez

Both verses were ok,

Str8,..
U shouldv came a bit more complex. Plus Ur lines were kinda stretched a bit. U should work on Ur structure and flow.

Maku,...
Ur style was ok but U should also fix Ur structure and flow. Ur punches were a lil more complex then hoods. a bit basic but it shows Ur elivating. keep it up. U got my votes just based on punches alone.

V/ Maku JaiiLiin

P.s. please vote honestly in atleast one of the battles in my sig. It would be greatly appreciated.

Maku JaiiLiin - Ayo shun you took this shit no doubt LOL.... This shiould be one sided as hell its obvious to see u win... Punches was harder, personals was harder, lyricz was mos def better, and you had nice structure... Ill shit fam...

str8_hood - Sorry but you lost dawg...

My vote= Maku JaiiLiin