Takin Ill To A New Level
 

My desert eagle bangs harder than four fifteen inch subs
When i spit my rhymes i get ur mind spinnin faster than dubs
Talk shit imma cut all ur fingers off n leave u wit stubs
Im starting my reign just like the chicago cubs
My rhymes hit u harder than bats made of pine
Only thing i got corked is a bottle of white wine
The way ill deal wit fake emcees is put u all in a line
Unload a round wit fury leavin ur vision blurry
Your dyin out just like Keith Murray
Now i gotta dip outta there in a hurry
Cuz the cops on the way n i dont wanna c da jury

:shoot: :help:

uppin for some feedback

Structure wasn't great, but it was a so-so self gloryfying piece. Coulda been better if you had put more complexity in it.

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134751
Hit this up.

this wasnt bad. it could of been better though

uppin

u gotta b kiddin me 20 views n only 2 peeps givin feedback damn