Tweener: Valor(0-0)vs.LethalLunatic(0-0)
 

deadlines:
battles go up monday
check in by wensday
verses due by thursday
votes due by the next sunday
rules:
no dick riding
no crew votes
no freeposting more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
up your battle more than three times in a row your dq'd
bar limits:
4 line min.
12 line max.

yo son I dont wanna be in this tournament no mo thats y i havent check this shit fo the longest so close this shit

check in

Ima battle this bitch

Checkin In On This Bitch.......*yawns*....lets Go!

this dude looses battles then cry's and throws fits..
i didn't even know they let herbs in hardwood class-sickz..
lmao at this dude thinking hes ~A LETHAL VETRAN~..(user title)
ill leave this guy's brain fryed needin ill-legal EX-CEDRIN..(pain killer)
yo in this shit your wackness aint packin any heat..
you should ask anyone dude there aint no beatin me..
its been a while homie wtf when the hell are u gonna be spittin..
and it's sad ur gonna loose and your verse is probably pre-writtin..

8 quik lines, u better show

The only person that is gonna ~rest ya case~ is me *
As the Judge, I’m a prove you wack so now your guilty
Uh huh okay now shut up before I cast ya dreams away **
Ok so your the jury and you can’t still put me away today ***
Wit rhymes or courage I’m still hittin you and ya crew ****
The ways you eva knew, ended up to come to hit you
Look at this cat thinkin he’s valor-able but he’s worthless *****
You can’t mess wit a cat that since birth-was-bless
Only thing you are to me is just another wack contestant
A shot to the stomach make your burn out into your intestant
It’s only the eleventh line and still I don't even need it
Ya try so hard to spit a verse that you actually bleed it

* Rest ya case= The Jury(his crew) Motto
** Cast ya dreams= dream cast(his crew
*** The jury can’t lock me up
**** Rhymes of courage- his user title
***** Valor-able= his name-able

damnnn this was a tyt battle but i gotta give it to lethal lunatic. He came out harder and his rhymes flowed better for me. He won this in multis,punches,metas everything. it was close though. No hate valor though good battle to both of ya

Punches: lethal
Metas: lethal
Multis: lethal
Structure: Tie
Flow: Lethal

Vote: Lethal Lunatic

uppin for sum votes please dont sleep on this

Uppin

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Good battle valor

you too man
good battle
;).................

Valor
this dude looses battles then cry's and throws fits..
i didn't even know they let herbs in hardwood class-sickz..
6.5/10...didnt rhyme well, but ok
lmao at this dude thinking hes ~A LETHAL VETRAN~..(user title)
ill leave this guy's brain fryed needin ill-legal EX-CEDRIN..(pain killer)
7/10...good punch
yo in this shit your wackness aint packin any heat..
you should ask anyone dude there aint no beatin me..
5/10...self glorification = :nono:
its been a while homie wtf when the hell are u gonna be spittin..
and it's sad ur gonna loose and your verse is probably pre-writtin..
6/10...the "prewritin" punches are played
overall - 6.125...u had some played shit, i only like like one line.

LL
The only person that is gonna ~rest ya case~ is me *
As the Judge, I’m a prove you wack so now your guilty
7/10...good opener
Uh huh okay now shut up before I cast ya dreams away **
Ok so your the jury and you can’t still put me away today ***
6.5/10...ok
Wit rhymes or courage I’m still hittin you and ya crew ****
The ways you eva knew, ended up to come to hit you
5/10...wtf are u talkin about.
Look at this cat thinkin he’s valor-able but he’s worthless *****
You can’t mess wit a cat that since birth-was-bless
5/10...huh?
Only thing you are to me is just another wack contestant
A shot to the stomach make your burn out into your intestant
6/10...ehhh
It’s only the eleventh line and still I don't even need it
Ya try so hard to spit a verse that you actually bleed it
7/10...good
overall - 6.083...sum of ur shit, i didnt understand...this shit was weak
v/Valor....can u guys return the favor with me versus calamity....vote will not be polled until then.

breakdown here it is...

valor first...

Valor
this dude looses battles then cry's and throws fits..
i didn't even know they let herbs in hardwood class-sickz..
7
lmao at this dude thinking hes ~A LETHAL VETRAN~..(user title)
ill leave this guy's brain fryed needin ill-legal EX-CEDRIN..(pain killer)
8
yo in this shit your wackness aint packin any heat..
you should ask anyone dude there aint no beatin me..
6
its been a while homie wtf when the hell are u gonna be spittin..
and it's sad ur gonna loose and your verse is probably pre-writtin..
6

now for ll...

LL
The only person that is gonna ~rest ya case~ is me *
As the Judge, I’m a prove you wack so now your guilty
6
Uh huh okay now shut up before I cast ya dreams away **
Ok so your the jury and you can’t still put me away today ***
6.5
Wit rhymes or courage I’m still hittin you and ya crew ****
The ways you eva knew, ended up to come to hit you
4
Look at this cat thinkin he’s valor-able but he’s worthless *****
You can’t mess wit a cat that since birth-was-bless
4 where's the punch man...
Only thing you are to me is just another wack contestant
A shot to the stomach make your burn out into your intestant
5
It’s only the eleventh line and still I don't even need it
Ya try so hard to spit a verse that you actually bleed it
4

alright for obvious reasons vote valor...

Valor got his hands down one-sided battle I expected more to be honest Valor came out all arms swinging valor had better punches personals wordplay structure and flow.

Lethal Lunatic, your verse I really expected more from you to be honest I was actually quite disappointed however I do think that you are better than this verse and perhaps in future battles you will be able to avoid the mistakes you may today

V/ Valor

cool uppin for votes its 3-1 ^ yea it was like a quick shit dat I did so w/e LO:L this is gonna be my first lost