Light:East Miles(0-0)vs.Yayo(0-0)
 

deadlines:
battles go up monday
check in by wensday
verses due by thursday
votes due by the next sunday
rules:
no dick riding
no crew votes
no freeposting more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
up your battle more than three times in a row your dq'd
bar limits:
4 line min.
12 line max.

Checkin in ill spit soon iight..................... Goodluck eastmiles

Yea here it comes......

Eh Yo Eastmiles you think you the next Eminem???//
Bitch i know your from detroit but you ain't nothing like him//
Check it this fukin faggots name is glowed in pink// *
Yo that juss made me think,that hes more gay than Nsync//
I could buss ya dome open and leave you literally open~minded//
You tried to look fo ya top but chu jus couldnt find it//
You like a marathon runner, runnin fo fun in the trials//
But i got chu all scared cuz you run to the EAST~for~miles//
This kid is an artist thats wats his occupation// **
He couldnt even draw like van gogh even if he was tracin//***
I burn you up like i got you canned like cremations//
This kid too pussy cuz his nutz is smaller than raisins//



* Look at his name on the leftside, it glows in pink.
** His occupation in his profile is an artist.
*** Van gogh is an artist who is remembered in artwork history.

okay lets go lol............................................... ...................

Okay son you fucked up ( echos )

Yo I got this

Look Yayo U fucked.//
1 dolla bitch!!!! I'll make 50 cent outta ya Buck.//
You from hawaii and you thinking you hard Knox//
This kidd need to go cold Turkey, Because he spent to long on that hard
Rock//
Yeah you was a Beast for awhile//
When I get done with this Bitch, I'ma make him walk his Block with a sign that says " I gotted shitted on By East Miles " :laugh: //
Yayo you hate me because I'm that wild//
But after this battle you gonna wanna take my style//
You in Hawaii, I'm in da Ghetto but I'm a laid back type a fellow//
That Blast lyrical metal to put ya weak ass meta's in the dirt under a meadow:thefinger //
If you win I quess you got this by Luck :cussing: //
But remember I don't give a fuck If my lyrics where bullets it'll leave a hole on the right side of your neck the size of a Hockey Puck :shoot: //


Meadow : a feild with flowers.....{ referring him to be in the dirt under a meadow, like the common saying 6 feet deep pushing up dasiy's }
Quote:1 dolla bitch!!!! I'll make [I]50 cent outta ya Buck.//....{ His name is yayo and 50 cent and Young Buck is in G unit }
Quote:You from hawaii and you thinking you hard Knox//
This kidd need to go cold Turkey, Because he spent to long on that hard
Rock//......{ He says he is from Hawaii and the title he wrote was " Hawaii.... THA ROCK " and Rock in the hood is referred to as crack.....thus he need to go cold turkey}

:thumbup: No shit just bizzness

iight lets get the votes poppin yo

wtf is this guy eastmile is spit was long but it was all fuckin retarded
metah-yayo
punchline-yayo
structer-yayo
flow-yayo
multis-yayo
vote is fo sho yayo

thanks for the vote flipsix. im up 1-0 now keep the votes comin and dont sleep on it

WTF that was shit from east miles......no good punches & flow was fucked..& get rid of bolding words...ur only menna bold ur punches & seein as u didnt have any dont...but even if u learn what a punch is DO NOT bold.

Yayo was ok.....some played stuff but better then East.

e.g.
I could buss ya dome open and leave you literally open~minded//
You tried to look fo ya top but chu jus couldnt find it//

^played.....

You like a marathon runner, runnin fo fun in the trials//
But i got chu all scared cuz you run to the EAST~for~miles//

^wack ok stuff.

Vote=Yayo......& its 1-0 now because flipsix isnt in the league...(i dont think)

metaz yayo...he also had tight personals and his shit was perfect...east..the way you typed thatshit was kinna horrible..so dawg but its like that...and you punches werent as hard as those of yayo to me.....tight yayo

v/yayo

yeah I have better things to do...........................lol so go ahead and give this to yayo lol.......=) I am not a good text battler But in audio I'll kill anyone and I mean anyone

Be sure to check my site and my music on soundclick links are at the bottom lol.......................................

YO uppin for votes in this piece!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

yayo good shit...simle a bit but good...wordplay..stucture okay..punches weak but ight...
east miles good shit son...structure and punches did you some justice..personals lacked.....


vote//yayo because he hit a lil harder

yayo won this little battle...i don't feel i need to explain...

flow ya
structure ya by a lot
punches ya

yayo