Light: TheStank(0-0)vs.!RiffRaff!
 

deadlines:
battles go up monday
check in by wensday
verses due by thursday
votes due by the next sunday
rules:
no dick riding
no crew votes
no freeposting more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
up your battle more than three times in a row your dq'd
bar limits:
4 line min.
12 line max.

I Already just battled against him... but Check Anyway

this battle was unexpected.
he was my last battle but checking in anyway.

2nd check.......
i`ll drop later today

unexpected rematch
 

the stank! shit, jus another win for my investment
fuck his verse......
hes battling me thats the only impressment.
im getting sick to the stomach with all your menstraul cravings
lil idiot........
......i could make a profit off you from your pencil shavings
you beat me last time round but that wont happen this time
only got that victory....
......coz he spent 2 days racking his mind.
im attacking his rhymes coz they aint all that
be hounest with yourself.........
.....they stink more than a wild pole cat
this time i wont hold back im a merk this cat.
loner cant even coup 1 freind........
.........to go to his birthday bash
im on a higher level to you, you fucking puff
the only time you see me.......
........is when your looking up
im a finish off with this, how you in the lightweight league.
dissing my skin colour........
.....nigger should be a white hate seed

Kid went over the line limit, but dont DQ him on that...

This Herb'll Rip himself, Paramedics are needing Sutures,
Fuck i wont need a psychic to determine this battle's future!!
Look at the statistics, i already merked this herb Before,
He's trying to mix with cement As a failed attempt to be Hardcore!!
Sending me tell's, pleading that he'll come hard this time,
He'll only string words together I wont even need a Diss-Rhyme!!
Running Circles around Riff, leaving him truly In-Spired,
Throwing hits as weak as fuck, Kinda Like a Boxer thats Retired!!
This Mathematical merking,lines of Five multiplied by two,
Riff, hows it feel to get merked by a Vet on his league Debut!!

the stank! shit, jus another win for my investment
fuck his verse......
hes battling me thats the only impressment.

Na..No Punch there..Weak 2/10

im getting sick to the stomach with all your menstraul cravings
lil idiot........
......i could make a profit off you from your pencil shavings

Weak as fuck..not to mention played 2/10

you beat me last time round but that wont happen this time
only got that victory....
......coz he spent 2 days racking his mind.

weak personal..good have been worded better 3/10

im attacking his rhymes coz they aint all that
be hounest with yourself.........
.....they stink more than a wild pole cat

That Bar stinked..2/10

this time i wont hold back im a merk this cat.
loner cant even coup 1 freind........
.........to go to his birthday bash

Yeah thas y hes riding in a crew? Played and weak 2/10

im on a higher level to you, you fucking puff
the only time you see me.......
........is when your looking up

(shakes head) Weak no creativity

im a finish off with this, how you in the lightweight league.
dissing my skin colour........
.....nigger should be a white hate seed

Omg Another weak bar..should ov guessed 2/10

All i got to say is the only thing good about this was the flow..sturture was ok but could ov been used better..Punches and personals were weak and played...was actually gonna stop voting at one point! they were that bad!..try and use some creativity in ur shit..worplay would be a good idea


This Herb'll Rip himself, Paramedics are needing Sutures,
Fuck i wont need a psychic to determine this battle's future!!

Ok..wasnt good though 4/10 seen better from you

Look at the statistics, i already merked this herb Before,
He's trying to mix with cement As a failed attempt to be Hardcore!!

Aight was creative..which is more than i can say for riff 5/10

Sending me tell's, pleading that he'll come hard this time,
He'll only string words together I wont even need a Diss-Rhyme!!

Aight personal..which i can see is true from the verse he dropped 6/10

Running Circles around Riff, leaving him truly In-Spired,
Throwing hits as weak as fuck, Kinda Like a Boxer thats Retired!!

no..this could ov been worded much better!!...3/10

This Mathematical merking,lines of Five multiplied by two,
Riff, hows it feel to get merked by a Vet on his league Debut!!

again not good..but ok..4/10

Was kinda dissapointed with this stank..seen MUCH better shit from you..flow was good..structure was ok fell off a couple of times though..personals and punches werent great but they were good enuff to beat ur opponent

V/ stank better punches and personals..just!!

lol at that nigger line.. your from what, england ?......................................

Uppinx1

Uppin x2

Blah

Stank Tore This

Riff Yo Structure Was Fucked.......

Bestline-



the stank! shit, jus another win for my investment
fuck his verse......
hes battling me thats the only impressment.

NiCe Vocab 8.5/10

Verse Gets 7/10

Stank

This Herb'll Rip himself, Paramedics are needing Sutures,
Fuck i wont need a psychic to determine this battle's future!!

9/10

Verse Gets a 8/10

winner Tha Stank...

Return Tha Favor...

Uppin

aight uppin
leave link and we`ll return the favour

come on guys where you all at huh?

hmm

RIFF RAFF:Flow was iight.. Punches werent really hittin.. Vocab was decent.. dont bold ya rhyme words like that.. we should be able to figure it out.. iight battle verse..


stank:mathmatical...is a no no lol.. dont use words like that.. even tho i know what you trying to do.. its a nice thought, but finishers like that dont really stand well ne more.. they are to played out... but i think you pulled it off with better punches..

wasent to excited aobut htis battle, but it could have always been worse :p


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