1 poet and 1 topical
 

for the dreamteam whois down

Im down I do topicals(average)
Text(vet)
punches(Above average)

Fam im good wit topical ill do a topial wit someon to show them im good wit shit ive expericened and ...shit that happening ....ill show you...who wants to battle me ina topical so i can prove it

Hello, i would like to try out for the poet spot if u dont mind, peep my pieces and holla at ur girl with some feedback..................http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132613
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134804

yep im a newb..................

but i can drop topical....


ima spit sumert quik now...
but i`ll battle anybody 4 a spot..
so jus set it up

not sure if this is poetry or topical...but check..


envisage my pain,as my heart breaks..my girl shakes ma world...
walks in takes my pride...after i gave diamonds and pearls...
my life stopped,emptyness fills me...as my head bobs n rocks..
i couldve done more...now she leaves me broke,torn and lost..
splitting head pain,consequences of migrain...u eva felt this pain?.
constant feelings of insane..smashes of door locks n chain..

negative thoughts..fear,dread..i cnt bear to lay my head..
everything revolves around the simple words she said...
its over,ive had enough,im gone,im out...rants n shouts
perpetual dissapointment...closed doors....linger out..
one day ma baby..one day lost n foreva..cnt get beyond
simple sounds,movements..internally,unrightly wronged

every day that passes...i hope i can cope with the strife..
but ma heart is broken...that girl was gonna be my wife..

maybe u forgot about this thread?, let me up it for ya............

I do poetry Ima beginner tho room for elevation...............

http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...21&page=1&pp=10

im good in both but i got many poems and open mic stuff and two topicals.....

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=131116 vs DON

http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...&highlight=virt vs killacanflow (5-0 me)

Yo.get Me In This Man..........topical Shit...
Maybe Reserve Or Sumert?

when do we find who is pickd