Yo read this to see if u want me
 

yo thus is a little verse ill spit



yo i dunno wots going on so ima just drop sumthin here

Yo my rymes are like a trivia/
they fuk ure head up like cociane from bolivia/
u aint herd of me u must be a hermit/
my rymes is tight so u better learn it/
weather or not i drop sumthin hot i always got tha flow/
lettin other mc's now that i'll bury ure dead body in the snow/
i aint puttin on no show so if u fuk wit me u better lay low/
smoke up the last of your weed/
coz im gonna plant a lyrical seed in your brain you wont forget/
my skill make other rappers regret getting into this game its a damn shame/
that i keep droppin shit making make peeps lose a little bit a credit/
ure ryme u might aswell shred it coz nefing i say will beat it so ure fake ass verse just keep it

so thats it u like my flow just send me a private message ok

your shit is ok you need to pollish it up a little but you had a few good lines at the begining

^^kid look at ur record man....elevatte....keep ur rhymes the same size.....dotn do that gansgta played shit.......