Presyce vs Golden shellz
 

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NO Swayin
NO BItin
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yea iight

just somethin quick

I burn unworthy soljahs from the tounge twist in between my lips..
Tighten my fist, punch a hole in your chest with my fist..
I stepped to da plate and your carreer stopped like short brakes..
Cause i move crowds like tectonic plates that cause earthquakes..
Unrehearsed i spit flames and prepare for the worst..
I flow like liquid and every emcee becomes sumereged..
Ill react like a cat when you arch your back and attack..
Causin me to sink sharp flows into your veins wit poisonous syntax..
Ill seperate your ligments and leave you in disfigurment..
Beat you until your skin color completley changes pigment..

just somethin quick

I burn unworthy soljahs from the tounge twist in between my lips..
Tighten my fist, punch a hole in your chest with my fist..
I stepped to da plate and your carreer stopped like short brakes..
Cause i move crowds like tectonic plates that cause earthquakes..
Unrehearsed i spit flames and prepare for the worst..
I flow like liquid and every emcee becomes sumereged..
Ill react like a cat when you arch your back and attack..
Causin me to sink sharp flows into your veins wit poisonous syntax..
Ill seperate your ligments and leave you in disfigurment..
Beat you until your skin color completley changes pigment..

damn my bad i thought i shit didnt send the first time so i sent it again

i said 5lines damn

nigga act like jim jones he act like he hard
he look like lil kim before her motherfuckin boob job

hell burn a ligment thats such a hard word
but ill put ya life on pause, like turnin a sharp curve

u servin me dog, thatll neva happen
u got as much chance in winnin as bill gates has in rappin

im livin my life dog u noe how it goes
but hes not a pimp so why da hell he fuckin wit my ho

wen i spit my freestyles i get like shaq
nah ima dominate i aint mean ima hack!?!

uppin for some votes

Presyce you had far to much self glorification in your verse that hit at the end though i liked but really no attempt at personals or punches.
Golden Shellz you attempted at more hits some connected some didn't that's just how it is.. nothin really special in the verse personals wise... but vote has to go to golden for makin a harder attempt....
oh yea shellz i holla'd at your bitch slap lets go for ten lines .. if you down go back to the bitchslap and accept...

bot sucked vote golden shellz..........for the most tryed punches

I like ya flow the vocab was nice..the flow was decent. Nice punches to..or attempted punches. Anyway u got my vote.

Umm I ment to say Presyce has my vote

Hardly an insult coming from someone in Lyrical Virus...Presyce...way too much self glorification..should used those lines to make some punches that were worth reading...yet..Golden used played shit that i really didnt care for

V/Presyce...return te favor in my battle against amayze, thanks

Presyce
structure was decent...some of ur lines were stretched though...flow fell off a little cause of the few stretched lines...u had a few multis...wordplay was ok...some of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Golden Shellz
structure was pretty good...flow was good for the most part...no multis...wordplay wasnt good...none of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Overall
Golden Shellz had the better structure...and the more stable flow...neither had good personals...Presyce had more multis...better wordplay...and more connecting punches...so basing off of that...Presyce gets my vote...

VOTE - PRESYCE

PLEASE return the favor with an honest on the link in my sig against bullethole...thanx...

2 me presyce won
he had better punches n his rymes
made alot more since
v/presyce