Ill Freestyle!
 

IT IS 8:53 WESTERN TIME RIGHT NOW..

I'M ABOUT TO START WRITING NOW!

CHECK IT,


I'm a Hard Hitter that'll knock a nigga out like Hard Liqour
But with the Chop I'll give you more "rounds" than Bartenders
I reach for light, but Stars Glimmer, from Yesterday it's Far Dimmer
Turn the heat up like an Arsonist, U don't recieve, then it's Hard ta Give
So Yo Chest is where the Target Is, His Heart'll Split
My City holds More Black People than Carthage Did
It's like my Feco Matter has an Engine the way niggas be "Startin Shit"
i'll ride by your set, Bombard Yo Clique,
You can run, but we blast Far Wit Clips
"I holds my own" while ya'll let another Niggas hold yo Hard Ass Dick
I be with My Niggers, and My Bitch, willin to Die With Her, My Sister,
We Ride Quicker, we cut n separate "Paper" Like Scisors
I rap the real, Live where I live, then judge, ya'll some Damn Punks
toat glocks, da only time U go fo the waist is when U pullin yo Pants Up
That's what I Rep Kid, where Nigs won't jus Let Live, They Step In to
Wreck Shit, My Town's history is Long n Hard, Like Erections
On the block, If that snitch sticks his head out the window again, I might just Behead em, I Come Wit Methods, and I truly Love My Coast
Cali Green, dreams going Up in Smoke, Up at Fo, Cuttin Dope,
Real Niggas Come n Go, If niggas got the heat, They Bust Fasho,
The Best Women, Attractions, Stars, Gangstas, Parties, Is how we Get By
Plus the best Weed, Just drive threw Cali, you'll Get High
You're Out of Place, U ain't from Cali? you must be from Outerspace
I'm just another MC from Around the Way,
Who jus finished a freestyle about his lifestyle n About His state

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Dope freestyle man, just heard that flow from beginning to end, liked your opener, nice way to start "im a hard hitter thatll knock a nigga out like hard liqour", "more rounds than bartenders" that shit was dope...i liked the detail in your verse also, a lot of good wordplay, the end was pefect also, "just finished a freestyle about his lifestyle n about his state", good way to close and sum it all up, nice

Thanx cuz^........................