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D-Tain vs WillNova
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no dick rider votes - Bitches check in then drop dont no show |
check in, yo, i know your not online but drop wen u get on, u did accept in bitch salpped
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definition of tru pain, I spit butane//
the only thing u d-tain is hard dick from UK// see how we play, left in rooms made fo emergencies// and when I talk about pounds, I don't mean english currency// u got words fo me, cut ya tongue, speak broken english// slurr ya language like Mike Tyson, Imma make u famous// too dangerous, flip continuosly like acrobatic gymnastics// then u panic cause of habit, like a flabbergastic faggat// I cause havoc, back out before it's to late// alter ya state, kinad like ya brain when u gettin baked// ......aight do you |
like a boxer with no arms, your punches will be abcent...
dont even have to try, i can take this win by accedent... u spit 10 lines wit no punches, u must be fooling about... coz the rules didnt say no punches, y u rulin them out?... you thought you was hot, till it came to spittin, u froze... u in 5 battles, and and gona keep ripped like tramps clothes... maybe i should let u correct your shit, give u a 10 line extention.. if you was a fukin milloinaire, you still wouldnt PAY attention... i should remind you that wackness is treatable here at RB... its called getting your self banned, try it and see.. |
yo uppin in here peeps,
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D-tain, ya bars was straight.... we need sum votes here.... uppin fo votes
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uppin here pleasewe do need votes
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uppin
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uppin for votes
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i'll give it to d-train, he came harder, his punches hit harder, although i have heard that 'PAY attention' line before...but everything else was tight
willnova, yo shit was tight, i just wasnt feeling it, some shit was HARD, but in the end train came harder and prepared to battle v/d-train |
WILLNOVA: YOUR VERSE WAS KINDA WEAK. THERE WERE NO FOR REAL PUNCHES. NEED TO ELEVATE. WORK ON FLOW & STRUCTURE. ALSO GET HARDER PUNCHES.
D-TAIN: YOU HAD A DECENT VERSE FOR THIS BATTLE. YOU HAD NICE FLOW & STRUCTURE. YOUR PUNCHES WERE MUCH BETTER THAN WILL, SO YOU GOT THIS BATTLE 4 SURE. VOTE= D-TAIN Hit one of my battles back,after all,I did take time 2 read this shit!!! |
Willnova: alrite well when i was readin this i thought this was a self glorification... no real punches in there and it was kinda weak...
D-tain: nice verse i was feelin it... good structure and nice punches i think u got this 1 wit a ko v/d-tain |
I aint gonna vote cuz me and Nova in the same crew but here's my 2 cents on it.
NOVA... Ur lines as far a structer was straight. U had good personals but Ur punches were all over the place on this one. U were too seriouce and kept Ur punches kinda basic. I was feeling Ur verse but at a point U went off key wit Ur style. these things here may point our faults in this battle. Ur flow was a lil off, Im not use to see this from U but ok. Ur openner had a good start but the Butane bit didn't ryme as good as U hoped it to. Ur closer was the worst part of Ur verse. It killed the good moment. I was feeling Ur whole verse and I honestly thoaght U had this nigga tho. Good verse, Use more complex and if U can, comical and complex Punches to uppin ur verse a lil more. dont be so seriouse wit the battle. Ur verse gets a 7 out of 10 D-Train.... Ur structure was ok too. a lil boring at times. U didn't transition too well but Ur flow was good from one line to the next, doesnt sound too good if U read it all together from bar to bar tho. U were feeding off his rymes which isn't always a good thing but U kept it cool and added some comedy to Ur punches. U stretch ur lines a bit but not enouf to get me crazy about it. Ur first line sounds like something I said befor in a battle, U couldv bitten it or made it up, I dont know. but try to be more creative wit how u say shit tho. Use better vocab and wordplay. all in all, Id give Ur verse an 8 out of 10 just cuz of the comical lines. thats all that kept U up on this one. Punches....D Structure.....D Flow.....D Multis....W Open.....W closer......D V/ would honestly go for D-Tain on this one. Yo will, U shouldve wrecked this kid but he came good on this one. sorry. |
aight nigga, good look.... hahahaahaha still uppin fo votes
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aight thanx for the votes, just to let u know, i didnt bie any of them lines, god they may of ben used beor, how many battles actually go on here?? any ways still uppin
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