Tourn vs Drastic Outlaw
 

10-12 lines
no hate,d/r,crew,or unexplained votes
NO FEEDING
due midnight

aite kid ill have my verse just make sure you got yours one

ya fake bitch...there must be a glitch in ya ass cause imma tax it
i'm overduein wackness..just to let everyone know i'm feelin Drastic
your raps' shit...but this is legit when i'm tearin "Folks Up"
cuz the only "Slobz Down" is this fucks sloppy sketches he drew up
As i threw up i spit out dudes' rhymes in a ziplock ...
but your shits so old..it made ya freshest seem like classic rock
i'm here to block ya advancement as if i coldhearted teacher
cuz ya held back like little boys after a service w/ a preacher
Drastic's a leacher and i'm not feedin this weary fool
then again the back of cerial is the best of his material

I'll "shread" you to pieces concider yaself "tourn"//
A loss fa you is my thesis youll need ya record reborn//
Sworn into secrecy cuz ya decentcy's nowhere near hot//
He's stupid thinkin-he's a real mc when money for his rhymes tha only thang hes got//
In this battle you're a dirty cause nothin but flaws//
Youre an "attach on" (d/r) like "shit stains" in "dirty draws"//
"PAUSE" so we can take a quick "moment of silence"//
Cuz ya flows is off track go ask ya "counsoler" for "guidence"//
Violence....................is all i bring up to tha plate//
Ya punches are played so "when in" this battle "winnin" became my fate//
Face to face ya bitch out as ya mumble and stutter with falter//
Watch yo rhymes get dismembered as thier "presence" gets "altered"//


AND IM OUT!!!!!!!!!! nice verse kid this a nice battle lets get some votes now

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yo man that was tyte but ima have to give it to Drastic,,

he was better n nice flow

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vote on my battle http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134616

Yeah it was a pretty good battle.

Tourn: Pretty good on the flow, count syllables a little better and it will be right on point...not too bad though. I liked how you had a rhyme from the last bar in the opener of the next bar to keep the flow going. Some good punches that were tied in with metas, not really too personal....but they were pretty hot. No real good multies to tie in with your verse, but over a pretty straight verse.

Drastic: Decent on the flow...you had some streched lines that just threw it off though, tourn was better than you here. Punches you were really personal with and you was on target with them. Pretty hard when you were throwing them as well. A few good multies, nothing spectacular but some added bonuses to your verse.

Pretty tight battle overall...I think it came down to the punches...where Drastic was minimally better.

v/Drastic Outlaw

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Tourn your punches were good, but not all the way up there compared to drastic. Tourns flow was pretty good, but drastic got ya on vocab and personals. Tourn ya shit was good, but missin some touch ups. Drastic just overall got this one.
no hate.
Vote=Drastic

Tourn you came alright soso but you talked a bit to much about yourself throw more punches the ones you threw was good you closer was aight though...
Drastic you just came harder with more punches and that not alot of self glorification.
Both had alright structure and flow keep elevatin
votes tah Drastic for havin more hittin punches

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shit it was close, but i would give it to tourn because i was feeling his shit

vote on it, and be mad that i voted against u, but u could vote on it too
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=135202