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|i Am Durmil| |i Am Ill|
I am shattering flattering masculine rappers in the abdomen
Travelin, stabbing in larger wounds then a leviathan javalin Its about time foul rhymes devour kinds raising eye brow lines I reign (rain) supreme like taking a leak off the top of cloud-nine I got rappin’ locked down too, ya'll best to bite something Cuz I drop more bars than officials in midget high jumpin Long ammo and a long range, it’ll teach you cats to run a mile And then leave a gap in ya teeth like Proof when he smiles Startin to learn how this board do it, I'm quick to slay posers Back to the picture, image is gangsta like fifty cent posters Fuck bitches half of ya dreams = half my established esteem And im so gully I’ll rock a casual tee while causin casualtee’s Fuck all you wastes, and fuck punchlines I’d rather punch ya face Durm equipped wit knuckles holdin more brass then a trumpet case I'm too crazy for most, Got my psychiatrist put in an institution Used to poke fun in court, Running train's on the female prosicution You wanna take a shot at me? I advise you not to try it G I've got the game locked down and theres no finding the key Not like I'm Santa Claus, But I am sayin i move rap(wrap) far Durmil soon to run this bored(board) like unamused trackstars Simply de-rib cats, Poppa (pop a) spine u'd think I'm bringin biggie back Only time ya emcees over my head is when I'm givin piggie backs *Not tryin to spark beef or diss anyone out there....just felt like adressin some skill to this board and do my rap thang.... uppin for sum feed |
how bout some feed.....
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Hot
That was a hot spit
had ill wordplay in there, vocab was fire, some funny and entertaining lines goos shit, keep it up |
^^^thanc for dat.....mo feed would be nice
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nice vocab man and incredible multis. i like it alot.
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this was pretty tight shit... hot vocab
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Pretty nice man... yo were startin up II again..
its gonna be called Explicit Thoughts but we still II.. since you been in II you can get in ET if you want in.. just post up in the forum.. |
nice drop flow was crazy vocab was there.....................
multis were hott.....basically everything was check out my open mic *Chocolate Time* (dont ask peeps) link in my siggy.............. |
thanx ya'll...i was goin for the whole vocab-meta angle wit this piece
uppin for mo f/b... |
more feedback ya'll.....................
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i like that spit it's was kewl
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kool poem
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^^^^not a poem homie...lol
mo f/b |
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