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WillNova 07-14-04 03:13 AM

another love poem
 
everybody doin sum love poems, so I thought I might as well write on too.....

I wish it was a dream, it's so much better to bear//
stuck emotionally, I wish I still had u here//
stolen from my tight grip, said, I never let u go//
time and I watched u slip, u drifted away so slow//
as the wind blows, a fragrance pose a fimilar flare to my nose//
to and fro, high and lo, I search, but ur no where close//
and even though, I have sumone new to kiss and hold//
at nights she wraps me tight and strong, but I still feel so cold//
no one feels this pain as I, its as if she's passed away//
I bow my head and cry in bed, and everynight I pray//
everyday it seems in vain, I know not fo wat I fight//
lost and away, my ex-fiance, I lost half of my life//

The Mexican 07-14-04 03:25 AM

DAMN Kidd dat was nice...real damn emotional on that...really feelin it...keep that shyt up iight peace

Introspect. 07-14-04 03:30 AM

it was aight structure was off though fix that

Introspect. 07-14-04 03:32 AM

pc bez

mcmix 07-16-04 03:34 AM

nice poem keep up the good job

shyluv 07-16-04 04:59 AM

good job

grandrapper 07-17-04 03:24 AM

nice poem


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