little key style
 

i still come down in slow motion /bullets fly through the air like they costing/ come take a sip of this deadly postion /blood ah flow from ya head like its lotion/im the franchise bitch yea ya heard /battlin me is like a jock fightin a neard/ no point .

feed back
 

lookin for feed back

ummm. yeah just wurk on it, keep writing..... maybe a bit longer too

umm
 

:evilgrin: good