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Presyce vs AutoMATIK™
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damn.you need an hour?
hmmm My verse will splatter this fool with constant substantial 'blows' to the 'throat' … As I rip every molecule in a brains until I leave every vessel left 'afloat' … Precyse bout to get his 'hands sliced',wit rhymes so cold to leave yo oil 'glands iced' … Takin yo soul like you 'spiritually heist', battling auto will get yo rhymes 'lyrically spliced' … And I 'keep heaters', with shit that’ll rip off yo flesh instantly like 'meat cleavers' … I aint 'sweet neither' … you gonna 'keep fever's when you stashed in my 'deep freezers' … It’s clear you were blessed wit 'whackness', I rhyme with my presence an 'spot flashes'... I spit 'hot gasses'... The only time u eat kids is when usin condoms as 'shot glasses' … My shits 'heavily' you ‘mis-use the gam wit puncheze,imma ‘bruise ya frame’ Wit 10linez this ‘dude is slain’ your style is whack and unclear like yo ‘username’ * *His glow is black on black w/e quick keystyle… waiting for you… |
damn.you need an hour?
hmmm My verse will splatter this fool with constant substantial 'blows' to the 'throat' … As I rip every molecule in a brains until I leave every vessel left 'afloat' … Precyse bout to get his 'hands sliced',wit rhymes so cold to leave yo oil 'glands iced' … Takin yo soul like you 'spiritually heist', battling auto will get yo rhymes 'lyrically spliced' … And I 'keep heaters', with shit that’ll rip off yo flesh instantly like 'meat cleavers' … I aint 'sweet neither' … you gonna 'keep fever's when you stashed in my 'deep freezers' … It’s clear you were blessed wit 'whackness', I rhyme with my presence an 'spot flashes'... I spit 'hot gasses'... The only time u eat kids is when usin condoms as 'shot glasses' … My shits 'heavily' you ‘mis-use the gam wit puncheze,imma ‘bruise ya frame’ Wit 10linez this ‘dude is slain’ your style is whack and unclear like yo ‘username’ * *His glow is black on black w/e quick keystyle… waiting for you… |
damn.you need an hour?
hmmm My verse will splatter this fool with constant substantial 'blows' to the 'throat' … As I rip every molecule in a brains until I leave every vessel left 'afloat' … Precyse bout to get his 'hands sliced',wit rhymes so cold to leave yo oil 'glands iced' … Takin yo soul like you 'spiritually heist', battling auto will get yo rhymes 'lyrically spliced' … And I 'keep heaters', with shit that’ll rip off yo flesh instantly like 'meat cleavers' … I aint 'sweet neither' … you gonna 'keep fever's when you stashed in my 'deep freezers' … It’s clear you were blessed wit 'whackness', I rhyme with my presence an 'spot flashes'... I spit 'hot gasses'... The only time u eat kids is when usin condoms as 'shot glasses' … My shits 'heavily' you ‘mis-use the gam wit puncheze,imma ‘bruise ya frame’ Wit 10linez this ‘dude is slain’ your style is whack and unclear like yo ‘username’ * *His glow is black on black w/e quick keystyle… waiting for you… |
Pigments-ruptured, i slit-n-cut-ya with twisted-thunder...
An leave ya bones in fragments...like ya sentence-structure... This bold-verse shows his flow's-worse than half-his-disses... Treat rap like a comedy show n put this cat-n-stitchez... Fuck this faggot's-business, i drown him in gasseous-liquidz... Snap-his-limbs-an send "MATIK" a pack of casts for-christmas... I flow-thru, ya cold-duke? battlin me was a bold-move... Now ya hittin rock bottom like skydivers with no-chutez... Whos? winnin-is-probable, whoever said this kid-is-an-obstacle... Forgot he makes less sense than the plot to mission-impossible... I'm violent-wit-ho's an rightfully-so, This Kids tryin-to-flow... I got him puttin his life on the line like survivin-on-coke!... |
Yo Uppin For Votes And How Many Times Yuo Gonna Post Ya Shit Dawg 3 Times
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my bad,i kept pushin REPLY cuz it was goin slow ... i was aggravated,lol.
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lol its kool this gonna be a good battle
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yo, yall both came hard so yall both get props, but in my opinion presyce came that much harder, i was feelin both your opener and closer and i liked how you got on automatik's structure, cuz it was kinda fucked up, but i'm not really one 2 talk. so my vote goes to presyce
ayo yall return the favor wit an honest vote here, and dont hate vote cuz i voted against u, that shit happens often http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134795 |
eh yo i thought that Automatik came out harder even though both spits were ILL and i was really feelin his rhyme. Damn you got skills both of ya.
Punches: Auto Metas: Tie Multis: Auto Structure: tie Flow: tie Vote: Automatik |
Good verses from both...
Auto:your flow was good,i was feelin that, your wordplay and the descriptive way you write shows that you have some skill, liked ur opener and closer, some funny lines in there too,the condom line and the last line, nice diss... Presyce:ur verse was ok, i just dont think u came as hard as Auto, you should try to use more complex structure, add some multis and work on vocab, but u aint bad tho,just not as strong as auto.........bein honest no hate......whole crew a fam VOTE:AutoMatik |
Presyce:ur verse was ok, i just dont think u came as hard as Auto, you should try to use more complex structure, you had some nice multies
AutoMatik:your flow was good,i was feelin that, your wordplay and the , liked ur opener and closer, some funny lines the condom line was pretty tight you had some pretty crazy metas in there VOTE:AutoMatik cause he cam harder with illllllll punches |
Both of yall cats was rippin shit out tha frame word up.
both was using crazy rhymes schemes I had to re-read both yall cats is ill specially in the time limit I got to give it to both of ya cus this shit was insane Yall need to go again wit some more rhymes at least another round just to make sure. |
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