DaDemorcrate vs. Killah Poet
 

No dr
No crew
No bullshit
No feeding off eachothers verse
No freeposting
No limit to verse length
1 round
You spit first

Should hand me da throne/ got my hands on da chrome
bring ya boys, bring ya toys Im a stand on my own
shells slam to ya dome den you land on da stones
Im a laugh while i blast and dismantle ya home/
the source of my pain/ no fortune or fame
but im scorchin da game like a torch or a flame
so long as im here im a torture da game/
i dont care we can battle you can bring men
Im killah poet son Im dirtier than Pig Pen/
best on the mic look Im blessed on the mic
now a days there' alot less of my type
its a mess when they write but you let in the hype
battle me and you'll be regrettin the fight
best with a pen and im great off da top/
Im white yeah ya right but da hates gotta stop
my tapes gotta drop just listen and you'll know it
number one on the charts gonna be Killah Poet

sorry if i violated any of your rules. but i gotta be out so i had to come off the top quick, im out now but i checkback when i get back

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lol..............Okay man I got this easy

When I checked your text
It seemed you where kind of perplexed
Tryin to flex muscles you don't have
This is a slaughter battle like a cattle vs. a calf
You couldn't ripp a verse if you wrote one on paper and split it in half
This cat style is really makin me laugh lets do the math " you vs. me= me whoopin your ass "
Killah Poet Nothing is Death about you
Your Poetry needs work because your shit is not quit Def
My lyrics bounce around the walls on my lungs,
and comes out on my tongue
faster than bullets out of Guns
That crack you smoken got you reaching incrediable heights
Because I believe you dropped the wrong verse....That shit should be posted in Open Mic.
The only way you can get a win is a No Show
But I take that back because no words at all is 20 times better than yo Flow

lmao!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :laugh: :thumbup:

lol..............Okay man I got this easy

When I checked your text
It seemed you where kind of perplexed
Tryin to flex muscles you don't have
This is a slaughter battle like a cattle vs. a calf
You couldn't ripp a verse if you wrote one on paper and split it in half
This cat style is really makin me laugh lets do the math " you vs. me= me whoopin your ass "
Killah Poet Nothing is Death about you
Your Poetry needs work because your shit is not quit Def
My lyrics bounce around the walls on my lungs,
and comes out on my tongue
faster than bullets out of Guns
That crack you smoken got you reaching incrediable heights
Because I believe you dropped the wrong verse....That shit should be posted in Open Mic.
The only way you can get a win is a No Show
But I take that back because no words at all is 20 times better than yo Flow

lmao!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :laugh: :thumbup:

lol..............Okay man I got this easy

When I checked your text
It seemed you where kind of perplexed
Tryin to flex muscles you don't have
This is a slaughter battle like a cattle vs. a calf
You couldn't ripp a verse if you wrote one on paper and split it in half
This cat style is really makin me laugh lets do the math " you vs. me= me whoopin your ass "
Killah Poet Nothing is Death about you
Your Poetry needs work because your shit is not quit Def
My lyrics bounce around the walls on my lungs,
and comes out on my tongue
faster than bullets out of Guns
That crack you smoken got you reaching incrediable heights
Because I believe you dropped the wrong verse....That shit should be posted in Open Mic.
The only way you can get a win is a No Show
But I take that back because no words at all is 20 times better than yo Flow

lmao!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :laugh: :thumbup:

my bad I fucked up man i posted my shit to many times just vote on one

yeah man This battle was aight................I liked Demorcrate shit better though it looked Like Killah Poet wrote that shit he had no personals no meta's but his flow was tight.....Overall he shit was really a written

Demorcrate: He lacked personals, and flow to me but his punches where pretty tight especailly that " The only way you can get a win is a No Show
But I take that back because no words at all is 20 times better than yo Flow " LOL that shit was a killer ending

vote/ DaDemorcrate

No bullshit just Bizzness

iight gentle men uppin for votes It me 1-0 come on ppl.............................

yo people uppin in this bitch!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!

DaDemocrate~ You thought you had this one easy~ I'm the one LMAO! Killah Poet love your shit. V/ Killah Poet

this vote was a hard one for me to pick, cos you both had one major problem, killah poet you flowed nicely, i saw lots of multis, and a couple of your punches were ok, but man your vocab was killin me, that shit was too plain. elevate your vox next time. democrate, your vocab was better than his and your punches were way nicer (especially your closer) but man oh man did your flow fuck up. try to work on that. this is where i had a tough time deciding but in the end its punches that win the battle so my vote goes to da democrate

vote- democrate

DAMN edit function...return the fave on the battles in my sig please they gettin slept on like mad

wat up wat up my people... heres the break down

Killah Poet: Sick flow wit some nice multis but im with hi-c on dis one expand ur vocab son- 8/10
DaDemorcrate: Like ur name but that doesnt have anything to do wit dis battle... u had some real tight punches but ur flow man... it just ruined it- 6/10

V/Killah

Killah Poet
dont put the /s at the end of ur lines...its mad newbish...structure is good...flow is on target...u had some multis...wordplay was wack...none of ur punches connected...no good personals...

DaDemorcrate
structure isnt very good...ur lines werent consistent length...flow fell off...no multis...wordplay was decent...a few of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Overall
Killah Poet had the better structure...the more stable flow...and more multis...neither had good personals...DaDemorcrate had better wordplay...and more connecting punches...and considering punches and wordplay r more important in a battle then structure,flow, and multis...DaDemorcrate gets my vote...close battle though...

VOTE - DADEMORCRATE

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