Biggie_XL vs Smoke
 

no d/r
no crew votes
no explaining lines
10 lines min
15 line max
verse due 20 min's after check in......

ok we gona finsh this in 30 my brotha wants tha computer

ok well check in no 20 min alrite lets do this shit aiight

aight........checkin in...i'mma drop right after u

well y'all ready to hear a spit starit form the B-I-G to tha G-I-E
cuz i mic and som beat and my fanatci is all a fella needs
cuz now it time to match witts with tha Smoke sreen
and after this shit this fool will turn envey green
cuz wit ma 2 fist ill kill this lame excuse fo an emcee
cuz this fagget hear can't spit a rhyme what will evan some close to bend me
cuz ill have tha motha fucka areal line then i Cock
and next think ya now what left of him is lined in chalk
cua ill spit thid like bad boy cuz i ma special delivery
and fo this fagget i wont pull ouy ma cavelrie
cuz ill i nee ma 2 fist and a mic in hand
and thin emcee dead like Da Band
cuz see this is that shit were i prevail
kill a bitch wit baseball bat and nail
im unthouch able cuz shit gon phase me
i spit like this and it make people Swazy


first battle aiight it may not be great

fuck im pissed i didn't look at ma spellin i type so fast i make so much fucking mistakes

I just seen lights flast before my eyes it was a unforgettable time
Cuz I almost died from laughin' too hard after I read your first line
I'mma give u some tips since this ya first, and I'm keepin it real
Invest in a nice rag, some turtle wax and go polish ya skills
Stay in class don't drop out Biggie please u need to stay in school
Take a look at the rules 10 - 15 lines for your verse you illiterate fool
We just started and I passed ya I’m bout to set the nitro- off
Biggie you wouldn’t “XL” if u was the programmer of Micro~soft (get it)
How does it feel to live a life and know u a coward
But can’t do nothin’ bout it cuz your dumb ass allow-it

shit!!! in the first line "flast" is suppose to be flash

i would correct my mistakes but i would just half to re rite ma hole verse man im stupid

uppin for some votes..................................

im uppin some votes............................. :thumbup:

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=135192

opener:smoke
punches:Smoke
flow:smoke
structure:smoke
vocab:smoke
personals:smoke
closer:smoke
overall:smokeskreen

one sided battle, Biggie u didnt come to well.

yoyoyo, my nigga smokescreen jus demolished this nigga Biggie.... he had me laughin the whole way thru.... Biggie need sum work and only had one good line, while smoke spit hard bars and kept the whole thing interesting

winner..... $MOKESKREEN