Met-Ah-Four vs. Thugzy
10-15 lines
no d/c/h u spit first no feeding house rules |
aight,checkin in,imna keyin nah!
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i ant battled fo a while,ere goes
am stickin up this wannabe mc,cheatin ya like a game/ ma lyrics 100 degree burn ya,like u jus got dowsed in flames/ am like a legend,uks finest,grimeiest known rapper/ u an unwanted nobody,sumthin like a used condom wrapper/ ma bars hit ya so hard,leave ya with broken ribs/ ma multies twist ya so bad,break both of ya wrists/ a cut ya,then put ya,in black bags for ya mother/ send her one half of ya body,then tell her to come find the other/ am a lyrical genius,i aint playin a mean this/ am sicker than gettin clap by been fucked through ya anus/ ya couldnt play me,even if a was burnt to c-d/ or downloaded from kazza,straight onto ya pc/ metaphur still be playin whack games on his dreamcast at home/ while i be playin xbox on the tv in the back of ma ford/ why call yaself meataphur,if u aint got none fool/ and best wishes to ya boy,ill tempa,get well soon/ i know tht was 16 lines,soz,15 dint work |
the last line was hit at ill-tempa cos he say he wa gona battle me,but backed out!
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you broke the rules.
U.s = United States Battle Another "Thug"? I Thought I Already Did tHis routine ................................i got this win easy, 5-0 unless he has dickriders, or not hes pretty much just upseen if this kid is shooting something he must be shootin rubber pelts .............................................i click so much i be clickin wit chicks more then drunkdrivers with seatbelts ima show this kid that underground uk aint nothin 2 da U.S ........................................show me ya beats my punches goin higher up in poll then spanish population rates ...........havent battled in a while i can see your low self-esteem ............................................kid is retarted he actually thought food was included under my girls peaches n creame ima wrap this up like a gwat wrappin sandwiches up in the deli ................................................im a get some hits im get hits 5-0 more votes then sadness then From Justin To Kelly |
aight,nice spit,u wanna disqualify,up 2you,say now,i admit i broke rules,by 1 line,so say now if u lettin it stand or not.
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Thug = your lines were played and flow was kinda choppy at times, you had fillers and sometimes went off topic not really trying to diss meta,instead talking about yourself, the punches were not so great and personals needed a boost, no wordplay or much meta's here, and u kept the vocab simple..try to incorporate much of those ingriedients possible next time..
Meta4 = i hate when people use all those fuckin dots, you also went on the self-promo thing talkin about yourself, but you had a lil better vocab and punches, not much personals , wordplay and meta's was about the same, but you had better punches which took it.. it basically came down to thugzy concentratin on dissin you more wit played and useless lines wit you comin and talkin about yourself wit like 3 to 4 decent punches which took the battle Vote = meta |
^^^^safe,i dunno if u can vote,its 150+ votes only!thanks 4 advice
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thugzy its straight..uppin..............................
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safe metaphur,good lookin out,soz bout tht..............uppin this......
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Thugzy - your punches were kinda played and your vocab was low. elevate some on the vocab and make your punches hit harder. Try to cut out those filter lines
Meta - pretty good verse. your punches hit harder than his and your personnals were better. better vocab than Thugzy and I think u had the overall better verse. Good battle Vote - Meta Need honest votes |
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uppin 4 votes.............................................
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