M.C. Skitlz Vs Revoke
 

was up
 

The rules are up man...should of told me before that
these are what we agreed

First Veerse
 

my style is like pushin Alt F4 it'll {shut you down}
its similar to a switchblade in a volkswagen beatle cuz i'll {cut a clown}
dont try to shit on me you aint potty {trained}
the only way your spit could be dirty is if you threw up and your shirt got {stained} :throwup:
so im sittin here wonderin why you {asked for me}
its almost as if you were lookin for a {catastrophy}
you couldnt battle me if you were backed by the confederate {cavalary}
my flows hurt my own jaw so bad i swear i got a {cavity}
instead of battlin me you shoulda kept it {real}
and checked in the bargain bin cuz its the only way you'll get a {deal}

http://pictures.sprintpcs.com//shar...ehGm8axw5Qoh8pL

^^his pic

i dont even have to try

A ghost writer is the only way your droppin hot when you face
cuz the threat of u droppin means no more than Michael Jackson’s baby
You cant even do text how the hell are you gonna get on radio playlists
this so called Mc, to make u famous u would let a label rape ya ANUS
Vanilla Ice is back people please stand up and show your respect
only problem is hes a overall fruit(skittles)and Male of F? still suspect
EmBrace This, I'll do you basic an...........all but off your Jaw
Your not an emcee just a common fraud…u can’t see me like Dr. Claw
to keep your self esteem up this kid prolly tells himself hes great
hope you dont believe in Destiny cuz you losing is going down as fate

uppin

you realy should have tryed and if i didnt want people to see my pic i wouldnt have posted it on rapbattles so you kinda did me a favor so thanks

upin^^^^^

M.C.Skitlz wins cuz Revoke was droppin more complicated rhymes. Keep it simple.
Come see mine http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137393
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137399

Haha, myster e u fuckin herb, complicated punches are good, and thats why revoke gets my vote... Skittles u had some decent punches, some were wayyyy played tho, like your opener, way wack... Also your struc was off, and i dint get teh whole( ) around your punches, kinda took away from your flow... Not a bad verse from you tho, jus elevated... Revoke you had a good verse, better punches and some nice personals in there, callin him vanilla ice lol.. You had good struc and good flow, and because of better punches and flow, u get my vote...

Fuck dat, i thought Skitlz linez was too simple an his shit was a little streched. Dog you coulda came wit better Wordplay(it was jus aiight). I gotta give tha vote too Revoke cuz his shit was funny as hell.
V/Revoke(vote me vs. Dynamik "P")

alright more votes....uppin

M.C. Skitlz

my style is like pushin Alt F4 it'll {shut you down}
its similar to a switchblade in a volkswagen beatle cuz i'll {cut a clown}
good start

dont try to shit on me you aint potty {trained}
the only way your spit could be dirty is if you threw up and your shirt got {stained}
1st line ok 2ed weak,

so im sittin here wonderin why you {asked for me}
its almost as if you were lookin for a {catastrophy}
thats good,

you couldnt battle me if you were backed by the confederate {cavalary}
my flows hurt my own jaw so bad i swear i got a {cavity}
decent,

instead of battlin me you shoulda kept it {real}
and checked in the bargain bin cuz its the only way you'll get a {deal}
haha decent ending...

Revoke

A ghost writer is the only way your droppin hot when you face
cuz the threat of u droppin means no more than Michael Jackson’s baby
ok start

You cant even do text how the hell are you gonna get on radio playlists
this so called Mc, to make u famous u would let a label rape ya ANUS
2ed line weak set up was decent...

Vanilla Ice is back people please stand up and show your respect
only problem is hes a overall fruit(skittles)and Male of F? still suspect
ummm?

EmBrace This, I'll do you basic an...........all but off your Jaw
Your not an emcee just a common fraud…u can’t see me like Dr. Claw
not feeling this

to keep your self esteem up this kid prolly tells himself hes great
hope you dont believe in Destiny cuz you losing is going down as fate
decent enough ending,


but my vote is for: M.C. Skitlz
just a better verse and more creative and harder hitting....

M.C. Skitilz

my style is like pushin Alt F4 it'll {shut you down}
its similar to a switchblade in a volkswagen beatle cuz i'll {cut a clown}
good wordplay...good multis...punch didnt connect very well... 5/10
dont try to shit on me you aint potty {trained}
the only way your spit could be dirty is if you threw up and your shirt got {stained}
good wordplay again...punch wasnt that hard hitting... 4/10
so im sittin here wonderin why you {asked for me}
its almost as if you were lookin for a {catastrophy}
good meta...no punch... 3/10
you couldnt battle me if you were backed by the confederate {cavalary}
my flows hurt my own jaw so bad i swear i got a {cavity}
cavalary and cavity dont rhyme...dont use self glorification in battles... 2/10
instead of battlin me you shoulda kept it {real}
and checked in the bargain bin cuz its the only way you'll get a {deal}
Lol. good wordplay...punch was pretty nice... 7/10

Overall - 21/50

Revoke

A ghost writer is the only way your droppin hot when you face
cuz the threat of u droppin means no more than Michael Jackson’s baby
face and baby dont rhyme...WEAK wordplay...punch didnt connect... 1/10
You cant even do text how the hell are you gonna get on radio playlists
this so called Mc, to make u famous u would let a label rape ya ANUS
playlist and anus dont rhyme...u had a multi...not good wordplay again...punch wasnt good either... 2/10
Vanilla Ice is back people please stand up and show your respect
only problem is hes a overall fruit(skittles)and Male of F? still suspect
suspect and respect dont rhyme, as ur rhyming 'pect' with 'pect' for that to rhyme, ud have to make the first syllable rhyme...vanilla ice shit is played...so is questioning his sexuality... 1/10
EmBrace This, I'll do you basic an...........all but off your Jaw
Your not an emcee just a common fraud…u can’t see me like Dr. Claw
YOU RHYMED!..Woot!...good multi...wordplay was weak again..punch didnt connect... 4/10
to keep your self esteem up this kid prolly tells himself hes great
hope you dont believe in Destiny cuz you losing is going down as fate
tells himself hes great?...thats bullshit...and the second line was wack as well... 2/10

Overall - 10/50

Conclusion
M.C. Skitlz wins quite easily.

VOTE - M.C. SKITLZ

/\ NOPE NOPE NOPE Revoke got this...he had a better structure than Skittles and his verse was comical and WAS in my eyes funny because to me comedy in a battles is probably jus as important as rhyming. Nice wordplay and good rhyming in this battle dawg keep it up.

Skitlz this whole {} thing you dont have to use, it was a nice attempt at creativity but it made ur verse look tacky and in my opinion a lil offensive because u made it look like we couldn't spot the rhyme...which i can although ur technique would work for ENERGY lol (coz he couldn't spot a rhyme at 10 past nine) lol

V/Revoke a more comical verse and also was harder w/the punches

ayo i'm mc skitlz i didn't like the whole {} shit and put the icon in wasn't to cool in my idea.

revoke it was tight

flow: both
style: revoke
punches: revoke
personals: revoke
enjoyment: revoke
vote revoke