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40z 07-16-04 06:34 PM

DarkLight vs. RapMisstress
 
10-20 lines
No hate, crew, D/R votes
No feeding
Verses due tonight at 8:00 PM or automatic DQ
May the best MC win
Good luck


Missed 8pm deadline

40z 07-16-04 06:45 PM

Checkin' in... Good luck, RapMisstress

RapMisstress 07-16-04 06:47 PM

Checkin' in also good luck to you also Dark Light.

40z 07-16-04 08:00 PM

Aight, check it...
Shit, no femcee on this site sucks quite like RapMisstress
Leave her lyrically undressed, her rhyme spirit in distress
I whored her to the max, now she calls herself my bitch
Fuck, she ain't much of a sight to see, but good for a lick
She prefers other hoes, at least she does somethin' right
Or maybe that's her flat ass in the av, even smaller in light
I dropped a half-ass verse here to match the figure of yours
I leave ur body used and stretched, u'll catch rain in ur pores
I'ma finish this bitch, Mortal Kombat ain't got nothin' on this
Wanted to be whored on RB? Here bitch, u got ur wish.
Later

*Truly a half assed, no show verse.* I win.*

RapMisstress 07-16-04 08:03 PM

Yo You's a bold muthafucka cuz you chose ta battle/ I see in ya profile that u play the piano/ You ain't Alicia Keys you would neva be/ Even if ya voice was as deep as her's you'd still be weak/ But you only fourteen you ain't even seen puberty/ Nigga i'll sit you on my knee and breast feed you like a NEWBIE/ You ain't on my level so ya bets ta commit suicide/ A bitch like me turn into Dr. Jekly and Ms. Hyde/ In other words you couldn't even see how i was comin/ A bitch attack like the muthafuckin 50ft woman/ So as I end this rememba one thing/ The only way you see light is if I let you keep livin'

fluidmoon 07-16-04 09:41 PM

yo this battle was tight:aaaiiggghhtttt

Darklight:you had some good punches in there, but ya flow was kinda simple,structure was good too, but you lacked multis and wordplay, cut and dry kinda,
RapMistress:your verse came way harder than darklight's verse, your punches were solid blows and ur shit was funny.....and u had wordplay, which tells me u know what ur doin........
VOTE:rapmisstress

RapMisstress 07-17-04 11:45 PM

yo thankx fluid, uppin this please more votes up in here.

RapMisstress 07-18-04 12:22 AM

come on people get some votes up in here, they will be well appreciated. :)

Mc DeaTh. 07-18-04 12:27 AM

if i vote here will u vote in return in my battles?

RapMisstress 07-18-04 12:41 AM

lol, Yea i would vote its all good, as long as ya vote is honest then its all good. I don
t mind that .

7*0*8* 07-18-04 01:27 AM

vote/ rapmistress : i liked his flow alot and his punches

besides da fact dat im 14 and i been through puberty a LONG time ago nikka!! lol

7*0*8* 07-18-04 01:29 AM

yo return da favor yo and vote on my battles....

ps. u cant talk bout newbies if ur STILL a newbie man lol

40z 07-18-04 09:08 AM

LOL...This is some bullshit.

tourn 07-18-04 09:18 AM

you mother fuckers are blind...

rap mistress- i'll sit you on my lap and breast feed you like a newbie?..wtf that automatically deducted like 4 points...wow...you had nothing in ya verse...organize ya shit....it's hard to read all jumbled up

darklight - pores line was good..sa'll ya had though....but a plus to ya verse was organization....i could read your verse even if it was half-assed i could still read the shit without struggling...

v-darklight

tourn 07-18-04 09:18 AM

oh and i voted for darklight because he had somewhat of a standout and his organization helped my vote

return the favor:Tourn Vs EB


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